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A Crumbling Tremendous Wall

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I walked for miles down streets of walls searching for my destination, lost in a maze, a labyrinth going nowhere it seemed to me; dark and gloomy, walls enclosed me in their dark ancient dampness, time ticked, tick, tock, tick, tock sounds faded existence seemed faraway and I was captured; a prisoner of the walls until I met a man and asked him for directions, I followed his words exactly, turn here and turn there and I did until I came to the end of the walled streets and faced a crumbling tremendous wall THE WALL- ended my journey, but not really as I had to turn and retrace my steps, back through that maze of narrow streets. _____________________________ October 10, 2016

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Date: 10/24/2016 6:00:00 PM
I sense a deep meaning behind the literal translation of your words. Very suspicious that a man gave you directions to a crumbling wall. Great piece!
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