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A Cruel Laughter

This key, how it laughs!- how it taunts! how it shows proof of a heart to unlock. Yet with every atempt it leaps from my grasp, And plays a cruel game of hide and seek. A game from which mine heart wanes. Now i find the key.. Only to hear the cruel laughter once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/1/2011 8:59:00 PM
great write congrats on your great win
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:24:00 AM
A belated congratulations Daniel on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 7:04:00 PM
very cool, how you make that key come to life with its cruel laughter. I enjoyed this one on the winner's list!
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Date: 6/25/2011 6:51:00 AM
Congrats Daniel on your amazing win in the contest with this dynamic entry luv..enjoy..
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