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A Crow Caws

a crow caws warning to the murder 'pon the ground.... through shrouded draped fog
Written: December 04, 2022 murder is a flock of crows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kerr Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 2:22 AM
Heartfelt and sincere congratulations, Sara, on your win with this extraordinary work. Your selection of appropriate imagery and skilful use of matching words is a credit to you. And many thanks for your recent insights on one of my writings, Howard
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 3:06 AM
Howard, I had forgotten that I wrote this one. When I saw the title, I thought I wonder what I had to say in this one. Thank you for stopping by. Sara K
Gasun Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Brilliant haiku my dear friend Sara. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed. Blessings to you always. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 8:09 AM
I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations, Len. I need all the blessings I can get. Sarr
George Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:45 PM
Congratulations Sara on your win. Hope you had a great weekend....
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:10 AM
Valsa, Yes, the weekend was nice. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:27 PM
Congrats on the HM, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 3:10 AM
Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Great haiku, Sara. CONGRATS! Janice
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 12:15 PM
Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Fowler Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Interesting and creative Sara. Congratulations! :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:50 AM
Why, thank you, Linda. Sara
Alex Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Wow! Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Thanks for visiting with congratulations. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 3:10 AM
This is wonderful. A perfect haiku.
Kendrick Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 6:51 AM
Why, thank you, Victor. I appreciate the visit. Sara
George Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 8:57 AM
The misty mornings are dreaded by even the crows. A beautiful haiku ! Are crows too common there? Though they are ubiquitous, crows are seen more commonly in India ....
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Valsa, Crows are very ubiquitous in our area especially where we live because my husband does a little gardening still and they love to eat the seeds and plants as they come up. There has been a murder here around our home ever since we moved here 57 years ago. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 3:09 PM
Nice one, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 3:49 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Deschler Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 10:33 AM
The eerie atmosphere you described just adds to the mysterious nature of this poem... I liked this one very much, Sara... Excellent work!
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 11:43 AM
Thank you, Kelly. It was a mysterious morning with the fog for sure. Sara
Lawless Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 8:47 AM
this could be the first Agatha Christie Haiku. Nicely done with a bit of misty eeriness.
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 11:41 AM
Why, thank you, John. I always have enjoyed watching her murder mysteries on TV. Sara
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