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a crocus

a crocus fighting for its day in the sun



Submitted on May 20, 2025 for contest SPRING MONOKU sponsored by JCB BRUL - RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 5/27/2025 6:31:00 PM
So beautiful, the picture and the Monoku. Congratulations, Dear Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2025 4:10:00 PM
Thank you very much, Malabika ~
Date: 5/26/2025 1:21:00 PM
Congrats to you as well! Your pieces are always delicate and warming.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2025 5:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Trina. Most appreciated ~
Date: 5/26/2025 12:19:00 PM
Congrats!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2025 5:51:00 PM
Thanks, Kim ~ have a lovely day
Date: 5/26/2025 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations Line on your win with this stoic tale of survival, a flower’s quest for sunshine. Thanks for reading my entry and your comment on it Howard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2025 5:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Howard ~ much appreciated
Date: 5/26/2025 2:38:00 AM
- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Line :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2025 5:50:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise ~ much appreciated
Date: 5/25/2025 9:30:00 PM
Perfect one for the picture, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2025 5:50:00 PM
Much appreciated, Andrea ~
Date: 5/10/2025 8:35:00 PM
My flowers will perk up when the sun comes back out! Nice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/11/2025 6:15:00 AM
And we need all the perkiness we can get ~
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