~a Crimson Rose Ii~

'Crashing'....Into the rocks....

I stare, until a light mist

Gathers itself within my eyes

I gance to my left, towards the cove

A sailboat sailing, just beyond an empty shore

I peer, I stare, but, 'She' is not there

I resend my sight....

Her bluest, of alluring blue eyes

Heavenly eyes~Her timeless glow!

Wearing a flowered sundress

Her shining, and flowing auburn hair

Standing there ~

I beam, as I gently ring the chimes

Those, that she did once fashion

Forever there, now by my side

Dolphines and butterflies

Her favorite flower....'A Crimson Rose' ~

I then set my coffee down

And, gather them within my hand

I think, I shall keep the top up, today 

It is, kind of cold....

"Can we dear, can we"

Peter Gabriel ~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Driving down a coastal road

On a grey and cloudy, seaside day

Somber silence, as I look toward the west

The oceans breaks, as I glance upon its edge....

Gazing, beyond its horizon, and beyond all time ~

Turning back ahead, and into the rear view mirror

A tiny heart, red, and her golden cross!

A tear from the corner of my eye, falls, as I arrive

I slowly pull up, park, and once again, get out

Across the solemn ground

That I have crossed before, I walk

I quietly and humbly kneel down

As I run my fingers, through her glistening hair....

"Hello my love," I say, as I lay them tenderly

Before 'Her Eyes!'~

There, for her grace to see~'Her Beauty!'

I carefully arrange them, my heart bleeding inside

As I remove the old~"And there you are, 'My Dear!'"

I then stand, and I hold her close....

Kissing the perfectness, of her wonderous lips!

And I whisper, "always," into her everlasting soul ~

"Forever 'My Love,' forever!"

A bright gleaming as I look unto the sky

And then, I close my eyes....

"In your eyes, the light the heat, I am complete"

"Can we dear, can we"

She giggles, as I hand her an eternal

And neverending promise, once again, within  

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~A Crimson Rose~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/19/2012 2:21:00 PM
Very romantic and dramatic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I noticed a name after the first part..Did someone else write that part?..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 6/24/2009 10:39:00 PM
Well, you sure know how to bring tears to a girl's eyes, you can feel the pain within this beautifully loving write of your precious love, it literally gave me chills! YOu paint a beautiful captivating picture Dearest John one with tear stained ink. Lovely! These 2 parts will definitely go to my favs! Love, Charlene
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:12:00 AM
john,ow my this made me cry,this poem from your sinciere heart of a devoted person to his love of his life,this is so beautiful,yes its heart breaking,what a tribute to a beautiful woman who carried the cross she lovesd so much,till she reached the land of no sorrows,the eternal life-im sure she looks over you and is very proud of you--im so sure--this goes to my favs john--with the poet too--awesome
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Date: 3/13/2009 10:03:00 AM
Outstanding work, John! The beauty of your words of love, the sad current of emotion moving through this and your vivid imagery cme together in perfect unison. Bittersweet reflections? ovely, John. I hope you are well! Thank you for your kind words, John. I felt good to write something and post yesterday! Have a great day, my friend! (Ecclesiastes 1:18) od bless you always, John. Love, Robin
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Date: 2/2/2009 7:08:00 PM
John I love this this is wonderful Michael GBU
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Date: 2/2/2009 7:07:00 PM
John this is beautiful. What a beautiful story of love and affection. Your chosen words put me there. The ocean the breeze the drive the top down wow what a loving adventure. I have been on vacation but Im extreemly busy. I just comment on my favorite poets your one of them. I miss your writings and I will read as many as I can. Miss your kind comments and your beautiful writes. GBU John and yours Michael
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Date: 2/1/2009 2:35:00 PM
Wow....this is lovely, John....it floats on sea and air with such romance! Very beautiful...especially love the part about brushing her hair...that is truely the sign of gentle love. Very very nice! ~ lSincerely, Carrie
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