A Cracked Wall

Many kids are in a rush again:
Confusion rejoices in their voices,
Stones splash in sacrifices –
The ancient wall has cracked:
The flames burn beyond control.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 5, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Good morning, Canny, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful day. Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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April 30, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Wonderful poem, Canny, kids have so much energy to change the world.
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April 29, 2013 at 1:10 AM
Congrats on your feature poem, I enjoyed reading this.
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October 9, 2009 at 4:54 AM
This is very thought provoking. Keep writing. Sara
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