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Another real tear jerker, ain't it.

My father stole my wife, Nadine, And they run off together. My brother took off after them, Hell bent for leather. I would have gone myself but then, I was on the job, So who was there to turn to then, But Brother Billy-Bob. He found them in a cheap motel, The other side of the mountain, Burst in the room and pulled his gun, And Dad went down 'thout countin'. Billy-Bob then grabbed Nadine, And threw her in the truck, You'd think he'd bring her straight to me, But there ain't no such luck. He looked into her big blue eyes, Said, You are now my gal. I really ought to take you home, But yer purty as a spotted cow. So now Nadine's with Bill-Bob, But I guess I'll just leave her. The best revenge on both of them, Is fer me to let him keep her.

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Date: 2/14/2017 10:00:00 AM
Judy, this should be on the radio! I love it! My best, chuck
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Date: 2/12/2017 2:33:00 PM
I am really enjoying these fun writes, and this really put a smile on my old face, thanks for sharing, Roy.
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Judy Ball
Date: 2/12/2017 4:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Roy. It was fun to do write . Glad it gave you a giggle. God Bless and Happy Valentine's Day. JB
Date: 2/12/2017 9:11:00 AM
Fabulously funny, well done.
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Date: 2/12/2017 2:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth. Glad it gave you a giggle. God Bless, JB
Date: 2/12/2017 9:01:00 AM
GOTD! (giggle of the day award). Thanks for the chuckles ~ john
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Date: 2/12/2017 2:04:00 PM
Thank you so much lim'rik. Glad you got a giggle from it. god Bless, JB
Date: 2/12/2017 7:25:00 AM
A love triangle hard to handle... Thank for the chuckles Judy..best wishes
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Date: 2/12/2017 1:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph. Glad it gave you a giggle. God Bless, JB
Date: 2/12/2017 3:24:00 AM
Love it, absolutely did. Creative and wit generated laughter - thank you for that. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 2/12/2017 1:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Cay Cay. Glad it tickled your funny bone. God Bless, JB

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