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Another real tear jerker, ain't it.

A Country Love Song

My father stole my wife, Nadine,
And they run off together.
My brother took off after them,
Hell bent for leather.

I would have gone myself but then,
I was on the job,
So who was there to turn to then,
But Brother Billy-Bob.

He found them in a cheap motel,
The other side of the mountain,
Burst in the room and pulled his gun,
And Dad went down 'thout countin'.

Billy-Bob then grabbed Nadine,
And threw her in the truck,
You'd think he'd bring her straight to me,
But there ain't no such luck.

He looked into her big blue eyes,
Said, You are now my gal.
I really ought to take you home,
But yer purty as a spotted cow.

So now Nadine's with Bill-Bob,
But I guess I'll just leave her.
The best revenge on both of them,
Is fer me to let him keep her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Melugin Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Judy, this should be on the radio! I love it! My best, chuck
Pett Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 2:33 PM
I am really enjoying these fun writes, and this really put a smile on my old face, thanks for sharing, Roy.
Ball Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Thanks so much Roy. It was fun to do write . Glad it gave you a giggle. God Bless and Happy Valentine's Day. JB
Kinch  Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Fabulously funny, well done.
Ball Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth. Glad it gave you a giggle. God Bless, JB
Flats Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 9:01 AM
GOTD! (giggle of the day award). Thanks for the chuckles ~ john
Ball Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Thank you so much lim'rik. Glad you got a giggle from it. god Bless, JB
May Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 7:25 AM
A love triangle hard to handle... Thank for the chuckles Judy..best wishes
Ball Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 1:56 PM
Thanks so much Joseph. Glad it gave you a giggle. God Bless, JB
Godwin Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 3:24 AM
Love it, absolutely did. Creative and wit generated laughter - thank you for that. All the best ... CayCay
Ball Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Thanks so much Cay Cay. Glad it tickled your funny bone. God Bless, JB
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