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A Corner Named Loneliness

I’m standing in the corner of a room named loneliness There are people all around me in their ties and fancy dress They’re engaged in conversation and though some of it’s with me without you in my life I’m as lonely as can be I’m laughing as I’m talking but my thoughts are all of you The way we use to laugh and the things we use to do I’m drinking and pretending that everything is fine But secretly I’m dying knowing you’re no longer mine I look around and wonder when this room became so small I’m searching for the exit with my back against the wall The ceiling’s getting shorter and the air is getting thin I dare not think about it or this room will start to spin Your face is flashing through my mind but I need to let it go There are many expectations I maintain this social show Yes somehow I’ll continue with this smile held on my face But secretly I’m dying In this cold and lonely place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/20/2021 12:13:00 AM
Hey Darrell…..a beautiful, relatable , sad poem …..heart tugger! Debx
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Darrell Rose
Date: 11/13/2021 8:00:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words..... I believe many can relate to the emptiness felt at the loss of a love.
Date: 6/28/2021 2:37:00 PM
Hey, Darrell! First, very well-versed prose; thank you for sharing—talented crafter with a pen! Best of Wishes, William (PS: I didn't even know you had won a contest; Great first place, then.)
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Date: 6/13/2021 6:30:00 AM
This such a beautiful sad poem.. Reminds me of a piece i wrote in my last year of high school, that was the loneliest year of my life... This is such a beautiful peace
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Date: 5/10/2021 11:33:00 PM
Amazing poetry, the flow of words just carry one to the end...Love it.
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Date: 2/15/2021 10:57:00 AM
Emotive and expressive winner. Way to go. Congrats on your name being on the winners' list. Sara
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Darrell Rose
Date: 2/18/2021 4:07:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words ! Have a wonderful day Sara. Darrell
Date: 2/15/2021 9:44:00 AM
Darrell, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/14/2021 1:30:00 AM
This is a brilliant, honest and beautifully observed poem well worth its 1st position in Bryan's contest. I love the cadence and meter. Cheers - Gary
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Darrell Rose
Date: 2/18/2021 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Gary I enjoy your work as well ! Darrell
Date: 11/3/2019 2:51:00 PM
Nicely done. x
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Darrell Rose
Date: 11/3/2019 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Jane ! It was a fun little write and I’m glad you enjoyed it. Darrell

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