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A Corner Named Loneliness

I’m standing in the corner 
of a room named loneliness  
 
There are people all around me 
in their ties and fancy dress

They’re engaged in conversation 
and though some of it’s with me

without you in my life 
I’m as lonely as can be 

I’m laughing as I’m talking 
but my thoughts are all of you

The way we use to laugh   
and the things we use to do

I’m drinking and pretending
that everything is fine

But secretly I’m dying  
knowing you’re no longer mine

I look around and wonder 
when this room became so small

I’m searching for the exit
with my back against the wall

The ceiling’s getting shorter 
and the air is getting thin 

I dare not think about it 
or this room will start to spin

Your face is flashing through my mind
but I need to let it go 

There are many expectations
I maintain this social show

Yes somehow I’ll continue 
with this smile held on my face

But secretly I’m dying 
In this cold and lonely place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/20/2021 12:13:00 AM
Hey Darrell…..a beautiful, relatable , sad poem …..heart tugger! Debx
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Darrell Rose
Date: 11/13/2021 8:00:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words..... I believe many can relate to the emptiness felt at the loss of a love.
Date: 6/28/2021 2:37:00 PM
Hey, Darrell! First, very well-versed prose; thank you for sharing—talented crafter with a pen! Best of Wishes, William (PS: I didn't even know you had won a contest; Great first place, then.)
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Date: 6/13/2021 6:30:00 AM
This such a beautiful sad poem.. Reminds me of a piece i wrote in my last year of high school, that was the loneliest year of my life... This is such a beautiful peace
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Date: 5/10/2021 11:33:00 PM
Amazing poetry, the flow of words just carry one to the end...Love it.
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Date: 2/15/2021 10:57:00 AM
Emotive and expressive winner. Way to go. Congrats on your name being on the winners' list. Sara
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Darrell Rose
Date: 2/18/2021 4:07:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words ! Have a wonderful day Sara. Darrell
Date: 2/15/2021 9:44:00 AM
Darrell, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/14/2021 1:30:00 AM
This is a brilliant, honest and beautifully observed poem well worth its 1st position in Bryan's contest. I love the cadence and meter. Cheers - Gary
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Darrell Rose
Date: 2/18/2021 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Gary I enjoy your work as well ! Darrell
Date: 11/3/2019 2:51:00 PM
Nicely done. x
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Darrell Rose
Date: 11/3/2019 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Jane ! It was a fun little write and I’m glad you enjoyed it. Darrell

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