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A Contemporary Conclusion

The contemporary ego feeding the ego. My right to be free my right to be me, fundamental and liberal no value ,no moral; Hey listen to me- just let me be. The contemporary credo feeding the ego. Don't ask me to see contribute or give, hey,live and let live don't inhibit me; Or my right to be free my right to be me. Rights,rights,rights; Ever looking within, the self-centred sin; The contemporary credo massage my ego.

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Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/29/2017 9:04:00 AM

Good flow & strongly stated. Not sure if ego is contemporary. I've witnessed selfish, callous behavior from overly-conservative people of all ages who like to give to charitable institutions --so long as their name was put on a plaque for all to see...another form of ego. The last generation & every one preceding it had egoists, narcissists, those who abused class systems, racial injustice and male domination. I never see sin as generational. That being said, I like your poem.

Brian Strand
Date: 5/29/2017 10:47:00 AM

Thanks for your comments Cyndi This box is too small to make a detailed response there to.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/26/2017 7:22:00 AM

Maybe...."self-less ego" should one strive for...good poem, Brian!

Brian Strand
Date: 5/26/2017 8:04:00 AM

Good point Jim,and thanks for your recent comment on my recent blog