A Constant Pain of Rain

A constant pain of rain. The roll of tires through town. The wipers dab my face - Eye clouds suspended tears. In Spring, I’ve lost my place. A constant pain of rain. The shock of scented air. Grave roots push up, stem bends. The sideways shower guts. The heartbreak never ends. A constant pain of rain. I’m driving through the storm. I squeeze raindrops, life-size - In tribute, clutch mom’s cross. Each Spring brings notched goodbyes.
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Hind Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 4:25 PM
A sensively written piece...memories can be oainful, but they are our gift
Kendrick Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 3:13 AM
Congrats on this great winning work in Andrea's Monchielle Contest. WTG. I enjoyed reading it. Sara
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 6:16 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write in Andrea's contest. Blessings to you
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 2:42 PM
Very clever imagery for the pain of rain!!! Sure enjoyed this one, Kim. Congrats.
Seeker Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 7:46 PM
“I always like walking in the rain, so no one can see me crying” ~ Charlie Chaplin. Your poem somehow made me recall these words. Exquisitely crafted Monchielle, Kim. The reader feels your deep anguish.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 8:37 PM
Thank you and for the quote from Chaplin too. I appreciate it.
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Very heartfelt verse, Kim.. Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Proxenos Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 5:35 AM
An emotional write dear Kim - passion flows thought the poem from start to finish. I sense the pain you feel withe the loss of your mom about a year ago and my thoughts are with you. It hasn't stopped raining for two weeks now, drizzle, drizzle drizzle. Best of luck in the contest. Love, Hugs, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Jennifer <3
George Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 10:21 PM
This is a poem that has a pulling melancholic tone.... ! I love the evocative effect of this beautiful Monchielle ! Happy Easter, Kim...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Poet Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Kim, your Monchielle poems are exquisite. I wish you all the best of luck in Andrea's contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Sotto!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Of all the things that go wrong you had to mention the wipers. I have to change one as the rubber is not good. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 4:38 PM
I know how that is too. ~ hugs
Hankins Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 12:34 PM
Lovely Monchielle verses, Kim. I wish you all the best in Andrea's contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 12:39 PM
Thank you, Milton!
Pandit Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Those showers can be annoying--especially when they keep coming back. But they signify the rebirth of nature after the winter.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Could be. Of course this is about mom’s death day. Spring will always remind me…sadness but also her sweetness
Sands Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Powerful poem Kim. Well written. Blessings :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Thank you, Heidi. Today is one year
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