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A Confused Haiku

A confused haiku
seeking help---
identity crisis


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By:kash poet

Contest:Haiku from the heart

Sponsor:Sydney~LeeAnn

**I think this is a CONTEMPORARY HAIKU.

(1)I have capitalised the title
(2)I have personified a haiku .
what else is needed?if any one knows,pl.suggest.

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Terry L. Allen Date: 5/14/2012 6:42:00 PM A period or question mark at the end after the word crisis would just about cover it all. Great concept and a good chuckle especially when I saw Charlie and Debbie's reviews. I like the way your mind works. Huggs TLee Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2012 11:05:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/13/2012 10:49:00 PM congrats Kash on an excellent win luv.. hope all is well again.. Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/13/2012 6:27:00 PM LOL!! Congratulations Kash!! my kinda' write...love it!! big hugs--love,deb Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/13/2012 5:49:00 PM Cute one..Got a chuckle..Congrats on your winning work..Sara Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/13/2012 5:00:00 PM This must not be too much of a confused haiku if it won!! ha ha.... You are rolling in the wins, Kash...So excited for all your poetry successes lately...I read thru the comments below and it seems as tho everyone enjoyed this as much as I did! oh yeah! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/10/2012 4:47:00 AM a confused haiku.. that's a great reminder of plenty of mine :)got me smilin Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/27/2012 1:43:00 PM yoohoo!..:).. where art thou?? Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/27/2012 9:35:00 AM love this Kash, i'm a little confused too, but surely to enjoy the poem is an important aspect as well. harry Login to Reply

Chittaranjan Dey Date: 3/27/2012 7:50:00 AM Love this dear poet. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/26/2012 10:29:00 PM I don't know what this contest is about yet but I sure enjoyed how you did it!! thanks so much for all your comments in my absence. I am trying to catch up on comments. I don't think I will finish tonight. I want to just go upstairs soon and rest. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/26/2012 10:09:00 PM love the wit Kash ;) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/26/2012 1:06:00 PM got something new, kashi.. come over.. was able to snatch a laptop!..:) hugggs! Login to Reply

Leila Mijares Date: 3/26/2012 6:12:00 AM You don't have to be confuse just use 575 like the way i did, lol!!!! God bless Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/25/2012 3:15:00 PM LOL, enjoyed this witty haiku, Kash Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/25/2012 9:38:00 AM a great example of Haiku extension Kash.. good luck luv.. thankxx for many prayers .. I am home from hospital tonight and enjoying soup.. playing with new program which types for me as I speak.. oh boy a new toy..luv.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/25/2012 7:26:00 AM Don't ask me just write, just write...Sara..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/25/2012 2:24:00 AM How about add punctuations!! :D maybe question marks at the end???! This one made me smile, kash-- I think you brought the confusion about haiku quite well here :) Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 3/25/2012 12:40:00 AM I don't know Kash. Looks to me like you got there on this one, but I'm new to this "contemporary" stuff. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2012 5:00:00 PM Confused you????? You do I well kash!!! - Luck in contest for you! - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/24/2012 3:40:00 PM Kash, just let your imagion go free if you write for the moon dust contest. (It could be talcum powder for a baby's "moon" or bottom. Really, take the subject anywhere. The sponsor enjoys creative approaches. Your writing has grown so much in the time I've known you. Another Souper and I were discussing this and related things a couple days ago. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/24/2012 2:25:00 PM OMG I must go read the 'rules" LOL of course this is not a haiku ....I think you can put (3) no sensory input (4) no season word [now nobody go nuts on me Kash asked me to do this...comment what I really think ;)] Light & Love [maybe I will try this antiku form!] Login to Reply

George Aul Date: 3/24/2012 1:51:00 PM Not so confusing - good one...........George Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 3/24/2012 1:46:00 PM Kash I think this sums up the haiku 'problem' at the moment, it personifies which is against the "rules" so it reads well to me, though I am no expert, I like it a lot, have a good weekend Kash...David Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/24/2012 1:31:00 PM so unique and edgy, kashi bud.. i like the contemporary approach of this 'ku... highly rated by me..:) huggs! Login to Reply

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