A Confused Haiku

A period or question mark at the end after the word crisis would just about cover it all. Great concept and a good chuckle especially when I saw Charlie and Debbie's reviews. I like the way your mind works. Huggs TLee

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Kash. Love, Carol

congrats Kash on an excellent win luv.. hope all is well again..

LOL!! Congratulations Kash!! my kinda' write...love it!! big hugs--love,deb

Cute one..Got a chuckle..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

This must not be too much of a confused haiku if it won!! ha ha.... You are rolling in the wins, Kash...So excited for all your poetry successes lately...I read thru the comments below and it seems as tho everyone enjoyed this as much as I did! oh yeah!

a confused haiku.. that's a great reminder of plenty of mine :)got me smilin

yoohoo!..:).. where art thou??

love this Kash, i'm a little confused too, but surely to enjoy the poem is an important aspect as well. harry

Love this dear poet.

I don't know what this contest is about yet but I sure enjoyed how you did it!! thanks so much for all your comments in my absence. I am trying to catch up on comments. I don't think I will finish tonight. I want to just go upstairs soon and rest. LUv, Andrea

love the wit Kash ;)

got something new, kashi.. come over.. was able to snatch a laptop!..:) hugggs!

You don't have to be confuse just use 575 like the way i did, lol!!!! God bless

LOL, enjoyed this witty haiku, Kash

a great example of Haiku extension Kash.. good luck luv.. thankxx for many prayers .. I am home from hospital tonight and enjoying soup.. playing with new program which types for me as I speak.. oh boy a new toy..luv..

Don't ask me just write, just write...Sara..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

How about add punctuations!! :D maybe question marks at the end???! This one made me smile, kash-- I think you brought the confusion about haiku quite well here :)

I don't know Kash. Looks to me like you got there on this one, but I'm new to this "contemporary" stuff.

Confused you????? You do I well kash!!! - Luck in contest for you! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kash, just let your imagion go free if you write for the moon dust contest. (It could be talcum powder for a baby's "moon" or bottom. Really, take the subject anywhere. The sponsor enjoys creative approaches. Your writing has grown so much in the time I've known you. Another Souper and I were discussing this and related things a couple days ago. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Love, Carolyn

OMG I must go read the 'rules" LOL of course this is not a haiku ....I think you can put (3) no sensory input (4) no season word [now nobody go nuts on me Kash asked me to do this...comment what I really think ;)] Light & Love [maybe I will try this antiku form!]

Not so confusing - good one...........George

Kash I think this sums up the haiku 'problem' at the moment, it personifies which is against the "rules" so it reads well to me, though I am no expert, I like it a lot, have a good weekend Kash...David

so unique and edgy, kashi bud.. i like the contemporary approach of this 'ku... highly rated by me..:) huggs!