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A Confused Haiku

A confused haiku seeking help--- identity crisis ============= By:kash poet Contest:Haiku from the heart Sponsor:Sydney~LeeAnn **I think this is a CONTEMPORARY HAIKU. (1)I have capitalised the title (2)I have personified a haiku . what else is needed?if any one knows,pl.suggest.

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Date: 5/14/2012 6:42:00 PM
A period or question mark at the end after the word crisis would just about cover it all. Great concept and a good chuckle especially when I saw Charlie and Debbie's reviews. I like the way your mind works. Huggs TLee
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:49:00 PM
congrats Kash on an excellent win luv.. hope all is well again..
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:27:00 PM
LOL!! Congratulations Kash!! my kinda' write...love it!! big hugs--love,deb
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Date: 4/13/2012 5:49:00 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2012 5:00:00 PM
This must not be too much of a confused haiku if it won!! ha ha.... You are rolling in the wins, Kash...So excited for all your poetry successes lately...I read thru the comments below and it seems as tho everyone enjoyed this as much as I did! oh yeah!
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Date: 4/10/2012 4:47:00 AM
a confused haiku.. that's a great reminder of plenty of mine :)got me smilin
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Date: 3/27/2012 1:43:00 PM
yoohoo!..:).. where art thou??
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:35:00 AM
love this Kash, i'm a little confused too, but surely to enjoy the poem is an important aspect as well. harry
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Date: 3/27/2012 7:50:00 AM
Love this dear poet.
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Date: 3/26/2012 10:29:00 PM
I don't know what this contest is about yet but I sure enjoyed how you did it!! thanks so much for all your comments in my absence. I am trying to catch up on comments. I don't think I will finish tonight. I want to just go upstairs soon and rest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/26/2012 10:09:00 PM
love the wit Kash ;)
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Date: 3/26/2012 1:06:00 PM
got something new, kashi.. come over.. was able to snatch a laptop!..:) hugggs!
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Date: 3/26/2012 6:12:00 AM
You don't have to be confuse just use 575 like the way i did, lol!!!! God bless
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Date: 3/25/2012 3:15:00 PM
LOL, enjoyed this witty haiku, Kash
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Date: 3/25/2012 9:38:00 AM
a great example of Haiku extension Kash.. good luck luv.. thankxx for many prayers .. I am home from hospital tonight and enjoying soup.. playing with new program which types for me as I speak.. oh boy a new toy..luv..
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Date: 3/25/2012 7:26:00 AM
Don't ask me just write, just write...Sara..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2012 2:24:00 AM
How about add punctuations!! :D maybe question marks at the end???! This one made me smile, kash-- I think you brought the confusion about haiku quite well here :)
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Date: 3/25/2012 12:40:00 AM
I don't know Kash. Looks to me like you got there on this one, but I'm new to this "contemporary" stuff.
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Date: 3/24/2012 5:00:00 PM
Confused you????? You do I well kash!!! - Luck in contest for you! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/24/2012 3:40:00 PM
Kash, just let your imagion go free if you write for the moon dust contest. (It could be talcum powder for a baby's "moon" or bottom. Really, take the subject anywhere. The sponsor enjoys creative approaches. Your writing has grown so much in the time I've known you. Another Souper and I were discussing this and related things a couple days ago. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2012 2:25:00 PM
OMG I must go read the 'rules" LOL of course this is not a haiku ....I think you can put (3) no sensory input (4) no season word [now nobody go nuts on me Kash asked me to do this...comment what I really think ;)] Light & Love [maybe I will try this antiku form!]
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:51:00 PM
Not so confusing - good one...........George
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:46:00 PM
Kash I think this sums up the haiku 'problem' at the moment, it personifies which is against the "rules" so it reads well to me, though I am no expert, I like it a lot, have a good weekend Kash...David
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:31:00 PM
so unique and edgy, kashi bud.. i like the contemporary approach of this 'ku... highly rated by me..:) huggs!
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