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A Confused Haiku

A confused haiku seeking help--- identity crisis ============= By:kash poet Contest:Haiku from the heart Sponsor:Sydney~LeeAnn **I think this is a CONTEMPORARY HAIKU. (1)I have capitalised the title (2)I have personified a haiku . what else is needed?if any one knows,pl.suggest.

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/14/2012 6:42:00 PM

A period or question mark at the end after the word crisis would just about cover it all. Great concept and a good chuckle especially when I saw Charlie and Debbie's reviews. I like the way your mind works. Huggs TLee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/13/2012 10:49:00 PM

congrats Kash on an excellent win luv.. hope all is well again..

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/13/2012 6:27:00 PM

LOL!! Congratulations Kash!! my kinda' write...love it!! big hugs--love,deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2012 5:49:00 PM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/13/2012 5:00:00 PM

This must not be too much of a confused haiku if it won!! ha ha.... You are rolling in the wins, Kash...So excited for all your poetry successes lately...I read thru the comments below and it seems as tho everyone enjoyed this as much as I did! oh yeah!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/10/2012 4:47:00 AM

a confused haiku.. that's a great reminder of plenty of mine :)got me smilin

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/27/2012 1:43:00 PM

yoohoo!..:).. where art thou??

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/27/2012 9:35:00 AM

love this Kash, i'm a little confused too, but surely to enjoy the poem is an important aspect as well. harry

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 3/27/2012 7:50:00 AM

Love this dear poet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2012 10:29:00 PM

I don't know what this contest is about yet but I sure enjoyed how you did it!! thanks so much for all your comments in my absence. I am trying to catch up on comments. I don't think I will finish tonight. I want to just go upstairs soon and rest. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/26/2012 10:09:00 PM

love the wit Kash ;)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2012 1:06:00 PM

got something new, kashi.. come over.. was able to snatch a laptop!..:) hugggs!

Leila Mijares

Date: 3/26/2012 6:12:00 AM

You don't have to be confuse just use 575 like the way i did, lol!!!! God bless

Jack Horne

Date: 3/25/2012 3:15:00 PM

LOL, enjoyed this witty haiku, Kash

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2012 9:38:00 AM

a great example of Haiku extension Kash.. good luck luv.. thankxx for many prayers .. I am home from hospital tonight and enjoying soup.. playing with new program which types for me as I speak.. oh boy a new toy..luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2012 7:26:00 AM

Don't ask me just write, just write...Sara..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/25/2012 2:24:00 AM

How about add punctuations!! :D maybe question marks at the end???! This one made me smile, kash-- I think you brought the confusion about haiku quite well here :)

Charles Henderson

Date: 3/25/2012 12:40:00 AM

I don't know Kash. Looks to me like you got there on this one, but I'm new to this "contemporary" stuff.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2012 5:00:00 PM

Confused you????? You do I well kash!!! - Luck in contest for you! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2012 3:40:00 PM

Kash, just let your imagion go free if you write for the moon dust contest. (It could be talcum powder for a baby's "moon" or bottom. Really, take the subject anywhere. The sponsor enjoys creative approaches. Your writing has grown so much in the time I've known you. Another Souper and I were discussing this and related things a couple days ago. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/24/2012 2:25:00 PM

OMG I must go read the 'rules" LOL of course this is not a haiku ....I think you can put (3) no sensory input (4) no season word [now nobody go nuts on me Kash asked me to do this...comment what I really think ;)] Light & Love [maybe I will try this antiku form!]

George Aul

Date: 3/24/2012 1:51:00 PM

Not so confusing - good one...........George

David Williams

Date: 3/24/2012 1:46:00 PM

Kash I think this sums up the haiku 'problem' at the moment, it personifies which is against the "rules" so it reads well to me, though I am no expert, I like it a lot, have a good weekend Kash...David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2012 1:31:00 PM

so unique and edgy, kashi bud.. i like the contemporary approach of this 'ku... highly rated by me..:) huggs!