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A Concert For Death In My Symphonic Life

At night I like to look to the sky and remember the lost ones by whom I'm inspired The angels Rena, Toni, Jeromiah, and David all showed me something, how can I repay them? My heros whos lives, troubled like mine yet never once did they ever fail to shine even as they thought they mattered not I noticed the love for the life through they fought every time they woke from the bed until one by one, my heros, fell dead When I remember, even though, ago long, I look to the heavens, and sing them a song. I feel them smile, and clap for another I give it all my love, like I do Teddy and Randy, my brothers who pulled me out of the hole in my head and gave me the strength to carry the dead into my concert, a symphonic life for its what they give me, when we get lost in the night.

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/22/2013 2:46:00 AM

A touching dirge like poem written in fab rhymin sequence. Your lovd ones will luv dis. I hope u read mine too.

Bj Fard
Date: 5/22/2013 4:41:00 AM

I wrote a poem just for you, my next one i am about to post was inspired by you. My gift to you, hopefully you can draw inspiration from it also. It is what I want to say to people who pretend to feel sorry for me even though their eyes show they don't care at all. I feel you can relate. Write on.

Bj Fard
Date: 5/22/2013 4:37:00 AM

Thank you Zaynub, It has been awhile since I received a comment. I really needed one tonight, the timing was almost as a sign. I a couple of your poems, the suicide one was deep. I have been pouring my heart out the last few poems I wrote...more so than usual. My heart has had alot to say lately...and to you it says thanks.