A Commitment To Love

She could have hardened her heart to Love,
Her list of disappointments would have hardened lesser hearts,
Instead she cloaked herself with Love,
Enough to keep out the Coldest wind,
Seeing a time when love would Re-awaken her expectant heart. 

In the spring she made sure Love's new growth,
Was not strangled by the weeds and vines.

In the Summer she shielded love from the harsh glare of the Sun,
Enjoying its company under her favorite tree.

In the Autumn she swept the leaves from the steps,
So, Love could stay mold free.

In the winter she kept her windows free of ice,
So, others could see Love dwelt there.

Now in her twilight years Love has repaid her with,
The offer of another equally Loving heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:28 PM
Hello David Smith, she worked hard for love to come and to remain. have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 2:43 PM
Yes that is so. Thank you for reading. Still no side effects from my Chemo. Best regards David in NZ
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 11:58 AM
Lovely write David, wonderful metaphors...
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 1:50 PM
Your comments appreciated.especially as so much is written a bout Love and coming up with something new and original a challenge.I start my Chemotherapy today. the Doctor is excellent. Regards David.
Wanter Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 9:50 AM
I knew someone like that - my best friend who recently passed away. You've written such a tender poem!
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 12:18 PM
That comment means a lot to me. This was based on real people I know. I wanted to do do justice to them and to give others hope. Hope your week is going well. Regards David
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