A Comic Strip Cartoon

One day in mid June, in far off Rangoon.
    The hand drawn baboon, a comic cartoon,
    Was flown to the moon, by hot air balloon.
    Then late afternoon, while in his pontoon.
    A massive monsoon, blew like a typhoon.
    He fired his harpoon, what's next! sometime soon.

    4/ 28/ 2017.

    ( The last adventure of baboon continued )

    With Mayday maroon, tied to his galoon
    He ditched his cardoon, but ate the dried prune.
    It was oppotune, with some good fortune.
    He missed a sand dune, and surfed the lagoon.
    Then with a soup spoon, rowed home to Cancun.
    He now plays basoon, in some old saloon.

    This was added after the contest was judged.
    The first of May twenty seventeen.
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Hamilton Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Great rhymes George, with a high level of difficulty, congrats on a fine win!
Hamilton Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 7:39 PM
Your add on is amazing, wow so many rhymes and not forced at all, great work!
Seal Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 3:55 AM
Hi John, many thanks for your most welcome comments on my poem. I do appreciate you doing so. My kindest regards. George.
Campbell Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Loved reading this, best of luck!
Seal Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 3:41 AM
Hello Barbara, thankyou for your best wishes, i do appreciate you doing so. My kindest regards to you. George
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April 29, 2017 at 3:26 AM
Hello Barbara, thankyou for your best wishes, i do appreciate you doing so. My kindest regards to you. George
Allison Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 2:27 PM
loved the flow of the poem and the humour George - this is a little gem good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 28, 2017 at 6:19 PM
Hi Jan, thankyou for a very quick response to my poem.I have the next part ready after the contest has been judged, which i will post whatever the outcome.After all everybody wants to know how it all pans out My warmest regards to you. George..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Action packed! Nice!
Seal Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 3:41 AM
Hi Kim, thankyou for commenting so kindly, my regards to you. George.
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April 29, 2017 at 3:29 AM
Hi Kim, thankyou for commenting so kindly, my regards to you. George.
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