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A Comforting Thing

I’d left old Kentucky for a while to roam, but now the roads call me, and I’m coming home. Just me and my pickup -we’re now headed to a chilled winter woodland, the cottage, and you. Those back roads keep calling. Old houses with gates I’m driving on past to where my dear awaits. I see in the distance a comforting thing. Smoke drifts from your chimney as wind starts to sing. A down- home cooked supper awaits me tonight then all-night sweet lovin’ near the warm firelight. 10/12/13

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Date: 11/12/2017 10:22:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your first place win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 11/11/2017 8:43:00 PM
Wonderful write, Andrea - reminds me of a Country or Folk tune ... congrats on your win, Friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/11/2017 8:23:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st Place win for this lovely poem, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/11/2017 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on your well-deserved poem, Andrea--Lovely poem! Janice
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Date: 11/11/2017 8:32:00 AM
Heartwarming dreamy poem - well deserving win. Congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 11/11/2017 7:01:00 AM
Wonderful pen Andrea! Congratulations :) xomo!
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Date: 11/11/2017 4:26:00 AM
A lovely poem Andrea, congrats :)
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Date: 4/10/2014 11:03:00 PM
Andrea Such a charming and sweet write. A very comforting and loving scene. Thank you for the nice comment on my Antiques poem. Yes, I put it in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 11/8/2013 3:50:00 PM
This sounds like a good old country song. Just need to write a little melody for it. Well done. love phyl
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Date: 11/5/2013 10:53:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I think you will have a winner here.
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:25:00 PM
Andrea, , enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~
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Date: 10/29/2013 3:49:00 PM
love this - such a comforting picture with the smoke from the chimney etc
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:11:00 PM
You nailed the country genre with respect and understanding. Gotta fined me a Cracker Barrel CTB
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Date: 10/28/2013 6:22:00 PM
Andrea my friend! I just found out that Carrie is a country music fan and now you too?? I thought I saw a little red on the back of your neck in one of those pictures of yours...Congragiations y'all...
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:53:00 AM
Hola, Andrea ... congratulations on your win...LINDA
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:14:00 AM
Yes..........I knew I would see that pick-up truck again !!!! Terrific!
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Date: 10/27/2013 8:25:00 PM
i knew this lovely write would do well...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/19/2013 12:28:00 PM
Now this is one of my favorites. I can see the entire story unfolding. Just lovely dearest poet... Lov, Shar
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:10:00 AM
Andrea; This is very beautiful - you put a lot of feelinf and soul in it. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 10/14/2013 5:40:00 PM
:) HI! I was reading this, thinking what a lovely song it would make and then I get to the ending and discover it IS a song! A smile-maker. My brother in law's funeral was this weekend. Life has been crazy! Hubby forced to work overtime, girl sick with one cold after another... will be TRYING to judge contest this week -- unless life throws me another wrench!!! So sorry,hon. I miss all of you... this is the first visit all week... hugs to ya. Hope YOU are well...
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Date: 10/14/2013 5:28:00 PM
This poem has a warm and cozy feeling to it. A wonderful description of the heartwarming, rustic style of country music. I loved the form of quatrain that you used, and you did it very nicely! I wish you good luck in the contest!...Thank you for reading my poem, and for your kind comments. I am glad you liked it! :)
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Date: 10/14/2013 11:04:00 AM
I can hear the twangy guitar and nasal voice in every word. Good writing. Good luck in the contest... Jack
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Date: 10/14/2013 7:49:00 AM
Wonderful poem. The words flow with the rhythm of a good song.
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Date: 10/14/2013 6:31:00 AM
A beautiful piece,well used imageries and style. Could feel the rhythm...wow! Thanks for your wonderful comments,amglad you love it. Hugs.
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Date: 10/14/2013 5:45:00 AM
Its got good flow and rhythm to it..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morning..I wonder if it could be set to music..Thanks for the visits to my page and faving one of my poems..I am honored that you liked it that well..Sara
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