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A Comet Ride

Dreaming dreams of purple-blue skies I thought I’d take a little ride, upon a comet, just to see, the things that I had not yet seen. So a comet tail I grabbed and into the universe we sailed. Then as I passed through Saturn’s rings electricity danced through me. Upon my passing right past Mars, I saw an incredible star; It warmed me with its soothing rays and left me in a cozy state. Venus, she was a lovely blue and white clouds swirled all ‘round her face. The Milky Way, it was the best; Spiraling swirls had me impressed. It danced ‘round like a spinning top; it’s arms, waving, reached out to me. Such a visage; such a beauty; I had to smile, with delight. The constellations, wondrous sight; within them I played, dot-to-dot. What a glorious adventure! Then I and comet said goodnight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/12/2019 3:19:00 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/15/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 4/7/2019 5:05:00 PM
Totally love your words and your imagery. A piece of art! Panagiota
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/8/2019 5:31:00 AM
Ooh, thanks so much!
Date: 4/3/2019 9:08:00 PM
You certainly took me on your ride, M.L.. A magical and mystical work of art.. You penned an amazing write.. A fave for me! Blessings, my friend..
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/4/2019 4:52:00 AM
Thanks so much.
Date: 3/23/2019 9:00:00 PM
A FAV for me; went straight to my already filled up FAV list. I hope I am not going to be limited any time soon. Love it!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/23/2019 9:53:00 PM
Me too; there are so many great poems that I like re-reading. Thanks.
Date: 3/23/2019 11:17:00 AM
Your poetry is very special. Today, I liked this one best, imagining you swirling through the heavens.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/23/2019 7:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, I am glad that you liked it.
Date: 3/23/2019 7:27:00 AM
I enjoyed this journey..a delightful ride..a splendid imagination.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/23/2019 7:34:00 PM
Good, everybody needs a "delightful ride" on occasion. Thanks Vijay.
Date: 3/22/2019 10:12:00 PM
Thanks for the ride!! LOVE this... another FAV! ;)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/23/2019 2:06:00 AM
Wow, I'm glad you liked it enough to "fav"; thanks.

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