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A Collection of Winter Haiku's

snow falling softly clothing all the world in white drifting aimlessly arctic snow flurries sweep across the barren lands settling in drifts ice glistening bright vast expanse over the lake now here until spring icicles dangling glittering silver droplets slowly they will melt slush everywhere slush left behind by melting snow land now watery

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Matthew Anish

Date: 11/26/2013 10:59:00 AM

Fine collection of 5 7 5 haikus here. You capture the season well in your work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2013 4:40:00 PM

hi Matthew ty for nice comments Shadow x smile hug

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2013 5:58:00 AM

Very descriptive work that you have penned in this one..I enjoyed reading it this morning..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2013 4:39:00 PM

ty Sara glad you liked it Shadow x smile hug

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/18/2013 5:47:00 PM

If I could imagine looking out the window and wanted to see the most beautiful winter see your poem would give me that vision thank you for giving me that. cheri

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2013 4:38:00 PM

that is so sweet of you Cherl ty Shadow x smile hug

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2013 4:22:00 PM

It reads like a tale of winter weather! Nice little descriptive poems for us to see, Shadow.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/18/2013 4:34:00 PM

Ty Andrea for your encouraging comment Shadow x smile hug

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2013 11:10:00 AM

- A haiku written beautiful and talented, I see your picture clearly! - Well done Shadow ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/18/2013 4:19:00 PM

Ty Anne Lise for sharing my vision Shadow x smile hug

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/18/2013 11:06:00 AM

Beautiful haiku serials from starting to end. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/18/2013 4:19:00 PM

Ty Bl you are always so encouraging Shadow x smile hug

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/18/2013 8:58:00 AM

1st and second haiku should be at the end because you are talking about melting which signify the end of winter. I would make the last haiku the first and the second last the second. Have I totally confused you now? *lol* whatever the order I love them all.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/18/2013 9:08:00 AM

yes you are right Richard these came from seeing a title called snowflake I have altered the order Shadow x smile hug