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A Collection of Winter Haiku's

snow falling softly
clothing all the world in white
drifting aimlessly


arctic snow flurries
sweep across the barren lands
settling in drifts


ice glistening bright
vast expanse over the lake
now here until spring


icicles dangling
glittering silver droplets
slowly they will melt


slush everywhere slush
left behind by melting snow
land now watery

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Matthew Anish Date: 11/26/2013 10:59:00 AM Fine collection of 5 7 5 haikus here. You capture the season well in your work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/27/2013 4:40:00 PM hi Matthew ty for nice comments Shadow x smile hug

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/19/2013 5:58:00 AM Very descriptive work that you have penned in this one..I enjoyed reading it this morning..Sara Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/27/2013 4:39:00 PM ty Sara glad you liked it Shadow x smile hug

Cherl Dunn Date: 11/18/2013 5:47:00 PM If I could imagine looking out the window and wanted to see the most beautiful winter see your poem would give me that vision thank you for giving me that. cheri Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/27/2013 4:38:00 PM that is so sweet of you Cherl ty Shadow x smile hug

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/18/2013 4:22:00 PM It reads like a tale of winter weather! Nice little descriptive poems for us to see, Shadow. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/18/2013 4:34:00 PM Ty Andrea for your encouraging comment Shadow x smile hug

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/18/2013 11:10:00 AM - A haiku written beautiful and talented, I see your picture clearly! - Well done Shadow ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/18/2013 4:19:00 PM Ty Anne Lise for sharing my vision Shadow x smile hug

Bl Devnath Date: 11/18/2013 11:06:00 AM Beautiful haiku serials from starting to end. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/18/2013 4:19:00 PM Ty Bl you are always so encouraging Shadow x smile hug

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/18/2013 8:58:00 AM 1st and second haiku should be at the end because you are talking about melting which signify the end of winter. I would make the last haiku the first and the second last the second. Have I totally confused you now? *lol* whatever the order I love them all. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/18/2013 9:08:00 AM yes you are right Richard these came from seeing a title called snowflake I have altered the order Shadow x smile hug