A Collaboration With Mystic Rose Poem Titled Breathe

Don't ask questions, neither you or I can answer
but let us glide gracefully together
as smooth and swift as a dancer
Anticipating beauty
residing within the boundaries of what's unkown
The sky grows dark
As the wind howls
Calling me back home 

What you seek
for you I'll find it
be my guidance 
if ever I seem blinded
feel love with no fear 
Simply because I don't 
seeking out the love
that my heart won't

Being free
as I break away
upon the clouds 
I wish to lay
Searching for something 
When I find none
doesn't mean it's over
I've only just begun 

My love for you slowly drifts back into reality
how I love so much
Is that which my eyes have just seen
To the moon I go in search of the sun
as brightness shines into my eyes
The wind howls and I close them
such a beautiful escape, it's something like a dream.
Breathe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 26, 2016 at 7:20 PM
Benquetta Flemmings, this is a lovely collaboration, love ynr-skat
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January 13, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Your poem is beautiful, Benquetta, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA
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January 13, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Hello Linda. I thank you for your comment on my poem. It was challenging, but, I accepted said challenge. I also look forward to viewing writings and getting to know more poets such a s yourself. The best of luck and encouragement to all of your endeavors.
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January 12, 2016 at 8:15 PM
Very good Benquetta! Good luck in the contest! *smiles* -luloo
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January 12, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Hi Laura. Thank you so much. I'm definitely smiling now.
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