''A Collaborated Love''

Amber silents, daylight violets, custom stares; Love comes here; Love is where there is caring faith; Loves committed grace; A chance we come together; Writing this love letter, caressing rhymes; For all times; Shall we write together "letters" and "words"; O love of love lets us write nigh...Come write with me, calvary, so lets elaborate, Shall we, yes we will collaborate ... Poet, James Edward Lee Sr. Oh yes, yes let our love words caress, let my written love wing its way to you; will try to keep my sweet talk in repress, but, the love I feel is hard to subdue ! I feel in my heart a breathless aching, oh, to be in your arms so safe and wrapped; hear my words- whisper from a pen shaking, why, in this amorous love are we trapped ? Words shudder in promise and surrender, yes, I am stung with the arrow of love; with feathery words you write so tender, and I send mine on the wings of a dove ! To collaborate love- is quite divine; so, could not resist to let my words twine ! Amber silents, daylight violets, custom stares; Love comes here; Love is where there is caring faith; Loves committed grace; A chance we come together; Writing this love letter, caressing rhymes; For all times; Shall we write together "letters" and "words"; O love of love lets us write nigh... Come write with me, calvary, so lets elaborate, Shall we, yes we will collaborate ... "Come live with me, and be my love, And we will some new pleasures prove, Of golden sands, and crystal brooks, With silken lines, and silver hooks." (Quote- John Donne, English Poet, 1572-1631) _________________________ August 18, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Sonnet/Free Verse/Quote//"A Collaborated Love" Copyright Protected, ID 19-19-1174-130-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Let Us Collaborate A Love Verse sponsor, James Edward Lee Sr. First Place

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Date: 10/30/2019 1:26:00 PM
Wonderful write, Dear Heart, weaving James words with yours, congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2019 3:22:00 PM
Eve, thanks so much for the wonderful and the congrats !
Date: 10/29/2019 12:33:00 PM
Lovely write, Constance! Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2019 6:11:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the lovely and the congrats !
Date: 8/19/2019 8:02:00 PM
this is gorgeous...i like your approach to this, i wove his words within mine... great poem :) hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2019 6:12:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the gorgeous !
Date: 8/18/2019 8:46:00 PM
Terrific, dear heart! Golly, hope you win first place. Amazingly lovely. Panagiota
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2019 6:13:00 PM
Panagiota, thanks so much for the nice comment, it did win first place !
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