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A Cold Winter Day

The cold winter day he left us behind A last spark of light would fade from his eyes Now he can have back his body and mind To sit on the sidelines, never the kind But fog clouded up his where’s, who’s and why’s The cold winter day he left us behind Fixing cars til he couldn’t, nose to the grind Missing the days of a brew with the guys Now he can have back his body and mind Glimpses of self fewer as he declined Letting go before he said his goodbyes The cold winter day he left us behind Now he can finally relax and unwind Now his young soul free of ailing disguise Now he can have back his body and mind Bittersweet, a loss but peace he will find Maybe he’s dancing somewhere in the skies The cold winter day he left us behind Now he can have back his body and mind

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Date: 1/16/2023 9:11:00 AM
bittersweet to be sure, sorry for your loss - the rise in dementia/cognitive decline-related illnesses over the past 10-20 years is rather startling statistically...
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Date: 1/16/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Jeff, not recent but last year about this time, just on my mind today I guess, yes those are very sad stats indeed

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