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Frightened by a sudden scream; a chill slithers up my spine and morphs into a quivering shudder that makes my skin crawl. A cold sweat breaks out, and the stiffened hairs on my neck slowly rise as I collapse into a panic mood, desperately trying to rationalize this. Fight or flight has me paralyzed, I can't move a muscle...until I hear that terrorizing scream again. And I run, fueled by the adrenalin of fear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/13/2019 6:37:00 AM
Chilling, I can feel the fear; beautifully done. Good luck.
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Date: 2/13/2019 7:17:00 AM
Thanks M.L., I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/11/2019 10:33:00 AM
I am almost never scared by your poems my friend.This time was different.
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Date: 2/11/2019 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/11/2019 10:01:00 AM
Captured in such a captivating way! Great write Emile! Good luck in the contest :) xomo!
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Date: 2/11/2019 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/11/2019 9:32:00 AM
Well done, Emile. Chilling.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/11/2019 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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