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A Cold Moon

cornstalk tambourins
a shivering of scarecrows
			…moonlight in the wind

12/6/2022

moonwinterhaiku

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Ann Peck

December 31, 2022 at 9:11 AM

A beautifully descriptive Haiku! I especially love "moonlight in the wind." Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

December 21, 2022 at 10:15 AM

Congratulations John! Your imagery always leaves me in awe of its creativity and this haiku is no different! Your words not only convey a picture but they convey the cold of the scene. Merry Christmas to you!