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A Coin In The Fountain

Twirling Head over heels Sun glinting On its edges Dreams afloat On riffled air The splash A cool see-saw descent Of hope’s Last penny

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/31/2024 7:42:00 PM
So many hopes and dreams riding on that 'lucky penny.' Great write, John! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/31/2024 8:47:00 AM
I love this poem from point of view of the coin. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 7/31/2024 7:46:00 AM
You need to book a flight to Rome and throw a coin into the Trevi!!!
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Date: 7/31/2024 5:02:00 AM
Very nice!
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