S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Poet Alliteration

A Cocktail of Kaleidoscope

(ALLITERATION)
Cows milked: mitigated mooing in the meadows then
Weaving on the warp, some workaholic women

Harvest of hapless halibuts on hooks
Bookish book-worms buried in books

A palomino and a pony patter on the paving
Hucksters and hawkers hawking every housing.

Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz
Beavers busy building beaver-dams but about it quite blasé.

Doves cooing in divine chorus
Frogs frisking out of focus
Horoscopes are hocus pocus.

Tidal waves of tsunami treacherously tread
Sea-anemones scattered upon the sea-bed.

Geraniums genuflecting in jungle-like gardens
Hunters wary of wandering wild-life wardens.

All this when I ventured about videotaping
Nature's much nicer even with no landscaping

These are direly different scenes from different parts of the globe
Perhaps like a space probe's kaleidoscopic poetic probe

( this poem has every letter of the alphabet except x)

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Diane M Quinlan August 23, 2015 at 5:55 PM Excellent poem piece mentioning nature at its best and worst. This is so in depth a piece to read. I too have done poems on a tsunami (Katrina) and have voiced on behalf of mother nation through my words---what man is doing to their planet's environment and wildlife.... needless killing of hunted animals where man is bringing their numbers too low and very close to distinction levels. I give this a 7.....didee

Thomas Martin June 10, 2015 at 12:58 PM Good use of alliteration! Enjoyed it.

Carl Halling May 12, 2015 at 5:40 AM This is gorgeous, S.Zaynub, such imaginative richness in the choice of words, love it.

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2015 at 3:51 PM oh I just love the ending, as if seeing all these events and sights from the eyes of a huge space ship kaeidoscope viewing earth from afar, with great close up vision!!!

Sara Kendrick May 11, 2015 at 8:30 AM Excellent use of alliteration..I like the creative way you went around the glode with this enchanting work..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus May 3, 2015 at 1:29 PM Hi Ms S! I love this cocktail of alliteration; carried me along with you and got me rapping to the music. Top marks to you! // paul

Christine Malliaros April 28, 2015 at 9:03 AM Hi, enjoyed your poem. Very well written. Your poem worked my brain, refreshing change from my emotional poetry! :)

Richard Lamoureux April 27, 2015 at 7:16 AM This was a fun one to read.

Debbie Guzzi April 27, 2015 at 6:54 AM I can see why you like my poetry I LOVE YOURS! learning to write haiku helped my other verses tremendously because it forces you to be hyper observant of 'everything' as you were in this delightful romp. Light & Love S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri April 27, 2015 at 12:35 PM My fond thanx Debbs for a delighting coment! Huggs pal.

Liam Mcdaid April 26, 2015 at 12:06 PM excellent pen zaynub very beautifully drawn wishing you a blessed day

Gary Bateman April 26, 2015 at 9:38 AM Zaynub, Great job with the alliteration here. The word variation is fantastic. Very well-done. A "7" and FAV from me. Best Always, Gary

Vincent Flannery April 25, 2015 at 9:44 AM I like your use of the words to add the tone to this piece. Such a variety and such the perfect title.. Great job, sounds neat also!