A Clown

a clown 
aims his gun and fires - -
petals fall

for Gwendolen’s Gun-o-ku contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/7/2013 4:37:00 PM
ok...I give up...LOL, every poem i have opened of yours has a comment already... anyways.. I'm stopping by to say hi and for some reason I have been thinking about you today... :-) always..Linda
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Date: 2/26/2013 4:46:00 PM
LOVE this. how the heck did I never see it before?? congrats, my good friend.
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:37:00 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Jack xx
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:08:00 PM
Jack, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2013 8:26:00 AM
nice image! creative idea for the contest :)
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Date: 1/30/2013 6:35:00 AM
if only Jack,, nice poem,, like this...
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Date: 1/27/2013 4:54:00 PM
Such a creative take on this contest! Good luck! :)
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Date: 1/27/2013 6:56:00 AM
Well done,Jack ! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2013 7:57:00 PM
: ) ... conjures up childhood memories. I wish all guns would fire petals, Jack. Thanks for the visit and kind comments. Best wishes for the contest. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/26/2013 6:38:00 PM
Nice haiku, Jack! Thanks for your comments on my work, they are appreciated! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:52:00 PM
Reads like a winner in my book..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for all the kind reviews..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2013 3:28:00 PM
This is a tremendously glorious write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a gorgeous piece, Great Work!!
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