Wilma Neels Poet Free verse

'a Closed Door To a New Beginning'

Even when you feel lost
  There is always a way
Of finding direction
  Somehow we tend to look
At a closed door
  As our last chance,

Wishful for it to open
  Meanwhile open doors 
Are begging for some attention

  Just a little nudge
That is all it would take
  But we tend to be afraid,
Fearful of the unknown
  Wasting our hopes and dreams 
On doors that was never 
  Meant for us to open

Look beyond that closed door
  Open yourself up to that 
And move past 
  The ones that were closed in your face…


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Tim B July 11, 2011 at 10:18 AM Amazing, absolutely true as well, lovely poem Wilma. "Write on good poet." -TimB

James Foulk June 24, 2011 at 1:02 PM a great write.

Vince Suzadail Jr. June 16, 2011 at 4:33 PM Too often we stay in our comfort zone, missing out on much of life. Vince

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2011 at 9:48 PM wow, a deep one with pearls of wisdom here VERY nice, Wilma. and I'm glad you liked Joy. LUv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne June 14, 2011 at 3:51 AM yes, you're so right, Wilma. Perhaps those doors that closed in our faces were never really open anyway ..although at times it's hard to believe that. Maybe just ajar a bit to sneak a little learning in? I see you have learned much and I shall try and remember that in my day to day living..... but then again ...memory is certainly not my strong suit, : )

Delysia Hendricks June 12, 2011 at 2:57 PM I'm enjoying the pearls of wisdom so eloquently dished up by you, Wilma. You go, homegirl!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 12, 2011 at 8:32 AM So much insight into this, missy :) and ouch! I think I myself have had those doors closed in my face (or umm did I close those doors O_o, tsk tsk) awesome write you have here and super thank you for the fave and also for your inspiring comments on both poems :D & thank you for the greetings :D mwahugs :D

James Fraser June 12, 2011 at 7:59 AM Terrific wisdom Wilma, sometimes it's not easy to go through the closed doors. But you will never know what's beyond unless one does :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 11, 2011 at 6:39 PM ohhhhhh so wonderful.. this is a rare beauty Wilma.. and full of interesting thoughts and emotions luv.. a wow..wow one..

Carolyn Devonshire June 11, 2011 at 9:59 AM Wow! Very philosophical, Wilma. I'm not one to let closed doors stop me from turning the knob. But once a door is closed in my face, there is no option but to move on. Awesome write, dear! Love, Carolyn

Joe Maverick June 11, 2011 at 9:21 AM There is a good deal of truth in your words Wilma, this sort of unembellished truth we all need to read...!