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A Close Shave

Should a Sheik seek a shave
Who'd shave a Sheik,
Sheik shavers should surely
So Sheik shavers Sheiks seek.






Entry for
Twist my Tongue Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nina Parmenter
17/1/2020. Placed 3rd.

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/24/2020 6:12:00 AM Wow! This is wonderfully done. Congrats! Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/24/2020 6:12:00 AM Thank you Caren. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2020 8:02:00 PM Great! Congratulations! Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/24/2020 3:26:00 AM Thank you Kim. :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/23/2020 7:20:00 PM way to go with your third place win, Gary. Congratulations. Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/24/2020 3:26:00 AM Thank you Andrea. :)

Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 1:59:00 PM My tongue is well and truly tied Gary :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/23/2020 2:38:00 PM Thank you Jan. :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/21/2020 8:14:00 PM You nailed the tongue-twister combo in my opinion, i.e., 's' and 'sh.' Just a great job, Gary, and a well-deserved podium win. Congrats, Gershon Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/22/2020 4:39:00 AM Thank you Gershon. :)

Line Gauthier Date: 1/21/2020 7:29:00 PM Back with well deserved congrats on your podium finish. Gary. Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/22/2020 4:39:00 AM Thank you Line. :)

Nick Bagnall Date: 1/21/2020 5:35:00 PM Yep that is pleasingly unpleasant to say, well done, enjoyed. Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/21/2020 5:52:00 PM Thank you Nick. :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/21/2020 4:25:00 PM I’m familiar with the condoms but not the shavers. Congrats on a fine win. Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/21/2020 4:32:00 PM Thank you Richard. :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/21/2020 2:07:00 PM What a win. My tongue now needs to rest. Enjoy your day writing........ Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/21/2020 2:29:00 PM Thank you Paula. :)

Line Gauthier Date: 1/17/2020 7:20:00 PM Very enjoyable tonguetwister, Gary. Well done. Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/18/2020 3:07:00 AM Thank you Line. :)