Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

A Close Shave

Should a Sheik seek a shave
Who'd shave a Sheik,
Sheik shavers should surely
So Sheik shavers Sheiks seek.






Entry for
Twist my Tongue Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nina Parmenter
17/1/2020. Placed 3rd.

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Caren Krutsinger January 24, 2020 at 6:12 AM Wow! This is wonderfully done. Congrats! Gary Smith January 24, 2020 at 6:12 AM Thank you Caren. :)

Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2020 at 8:02 PM Great! Congratulations! Gary Smith January 24, 2020 at 3:26 AM Thank you Kim. :)

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 7:20 PM way to go with your third place win, Gary. Congratulations. Gary Smith January 24, 2020 at 3:26 AM Thank you Andrea. :)

Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 1:59 PM My tongue is well and truly tied Gary :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Gary Smith January 23, 2020 at 2:38 PM Thank you Jan. :)

Gershon Wolf January 21, 2020 at 8:14 PM You nailed the tongue-twister combo in my opinion, i.e., 's' and 'sh.' Just a great job, Gary, and a well-deserved podium win. Congrats, Gershon Gary Smith January 22, 2020 at 4:39 AM Thank you Gershon. :)

Line Gauthier January 21, 2020 at 7:29 PM Back with well deserved congrats on your podium finish. Gary. Gary Smith January 22, 2020 at 4:39 AM Thank you Line. :)

Nick Bagnall January 21, 2020 at 5:35 PM Yep that is pleasingly unpleasant to say, well done, enjoyed. Gary Smith January 21, 2020 at 5:52 PM Thank you Nick. :)

Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2020 at 4:25 PM I’m familiar with the condoms but not the shavers. Congrats on a fine win. Gary Smith January 21, 2020 at 4:32 PM Thank you Richard. :)

Paula Goldsmith January 21, 2020 at 2:07 PM What a win. My tongue now needs to rest. Enjoy your day writing........ Gary Smith January 21, 2020 at 2:29 PM Thank you Paula. :)

Line Gauthier January 17, 2020 at 7:20 PM Very enjoyable tonguetwister, Gary. Well done. Gary Smith January 18, 2020 at 3:07 AM Thank you Line. :)