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A Cleansing Touch

The morning was calm and cool
After a rainy monsoon night
The wind was playing with everything it can put hands upon
Pushing down and thrashing, making a scene so bizarre
Pretending like the world cup players in the grounds of  Brazil
In this third floor apartment at Kochi, India.

Got up a little late than usual
Walked straight to the front door
To catch hold of the morning newspaper
As if something will happen to the world              
If it is not read on time.

On opening the  front door
Off went the healthy mood as  something unpleasant  awaited  there.
The two big waste buckets, our neighbor’s,
Lying side turned down, wide open,  touching our door.
An ugly sight  seen sometimes, 
Today the naughty monsoon wind had done it.

No! This is something a lady hates to see right in front of the door
Especially in a tranquil morning, like  today’s.
Blue and clear was the view of the sky
But clouds  grey and dark gathered in my mind
Before late it might pour
I feared much.
Let the neighbor come, will  put an end to this
Lapses no more I’ll bear, the last one will be today
Sat on the sofa waiting
For somebody to appear.

Moments passed and  neighbor’s door opened
The youngest of the family came out.
Placing  the first step out,  turned to me with a lovely smile
As though a  bud is slowly turning into full bloom
Then came a  “Hm.." from the little dear
To attract my attention
“Good Morning!’’ What else can I say?
He is our dear Thejus  who came to the world
Only  just three years before.
 
Thejus came to our door, was  still in his nightwear 
Presented me  with a more hearty smile.
Oh! The boy's sparkling eyes noticed something unusual about the buckets
Of which of course  had a little doubt 
Who the owner really is. 
Asked with the innocence only a three year old can own
“This is mine, no?”.”Yes”
“Shall I take it and place it there?” in the sweetest tone of a toddler.
Don’t know to where my ill feelings
Those got  sedimented in the serene morning
Flew away
Feeling ashamed by the little one’s magic touch.
Finishing off all the stains in my heart
More like a machine,  pronounced a “Yeah”
The boy lifted the bins one by one, a little heavy for his age
Placed them in their position and didn't care to turn back
Started playing with his small bicycle
Leaving his grown-up neighbor to reflect over a verse from The Holy Bible,

   "Verily I say unto you, Except ye be converted, and become as little children, 
ye shall not enter into the kingdom of heaven".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/20/2014 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Jessy, for the reply...Linda
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Date: 8/14/2014 10:27:00 PM
Jessy, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 8/6/2014 9:41:00 PM
Jessy, Congratulations, In Carol's Unsung Hero Contest. LINDA
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Jessy David
Date: 8/7/2014 4:51:00 AM
Thank you PD.
Date: 8/2/2014 10:50:00 AM
This a great story Jessy...If we look at the world through the eyes of a child things would be much better....hugs Tim
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Tim. Yes. But how many of us can do that!
Date: 8/2/2014 6:27:00 AM
great message my friend, grats on a first place winner!
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Date: 8/2/2014 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Casarah.
Date: 8/1/2014 11:32:00 PM
Powerful, inspirational write! Congratulations on your great win!Kika
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Date: 8/2/2014 12:02:00 AM
Thank you Kika. The poem was a real life experience.
Date: 8/1/2014 7:37:00 AM
Bravo, Jessy, on such a great piece! Congratulations on a wonderful, well-deserved win! Pandita
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Date: 8/1/2014 8:36:00 AM
Thank You Pandita. This appreciation itself is a win for me!
Date: 8/1/2014 5:38:00 AM
A Great message with a fine win, Jessy. congrats
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Mehtaji.
Date: 7/29/2014 2:35:00 PM
Jessy, thank you for the reply
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Date: 7/29/2014 4:12:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jessy :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/29/2014 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Ann Lise for your comments.. Happy that I found this community. Thank you for the welcoming words! Let us make PoetrySoup a haven
Date: 7/28/2014 1:21:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jessy. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/29/2014 5:09:00 AM
Thank you for reading my first poem posted in PoetrySoup. Of course I will visit other's pages.
Date: 7/28/2014 12:41:00 PM
Hi Jessy, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/29/2014 5:18:00 AM
Thank you Linda(am I right?). You are a creator not d.
Date: 7/28/2014 11:06:00 AM
This is utterly beautiful. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you leave a comment on someone else's poem... It will leave a trail so they can come read yours... Please continue to write. Under 'contests' I have a contest called 'Unsung Heroes". I would love you to enter this so it can be show cased. That little boy would qualify perfectly. Others would love this poem too. Your new friend.
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Jessy David
Date: 7/29/2014 5:22:00 AM
Thank you carol. Thank you for the tips.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 7/28/2014 11:07:00 AM
PS. I forgot to say "Welcome to PoetrySoup!"

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