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A Cleansing Lust

Luscious Pomegranate. Sensuously caresses, Cares go down the drain!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/10/2009 4:46:00 AM

how true how true! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2009 8:24:00 PM

Wonderfully descriptive haiku, Marty, so enjoyed .. luv your wording.. thankxxx for your gracious comments on my poetry tonight.. much appreciated... keep up this great writing for us to enjoy.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Donna Golden

Date: 11/7/2009 6:42:00 PM

:o) Delicious tidbit here, Marty! Hugs, Donna

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/7/2009 12:27:00 AM

Nice Haiku Marty! :) thanks for your kind comment and I appreciate your reading time... I'll be back for more of you too ;)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/6/2009 3:04:00 PM

wow..excellent--Charma

James Fraser

Date: 11/4/2009 3:16:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Marty >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/4/2009 2:21:00 PM

this could be read so many ways, interesting, enjoyed!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/3/2009 8:22:00 PM

Interesting and well written Haiku. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/3/2009 8:02:00 PM

I must agree with Sue, Martin. There is a lot said in this brief verse form. Sometimes a moment of delight can erase the cares away. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

Sue Mason

Date: 11/3/2009 7:06:00 PM

Hmmmm ... for not thinking of yourself as a poet or being "too deep", you've got quite a brillant Haiku here my friend and I love the title ... smile ...