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A Cleansing Lust

Luscious Pomegranate. Sensuously caresses, Cares go down the drain!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/10/2009 4:46:00 AM
how true how true! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2009 8:24:00 PM
Wonderfully descriptive haiku, Marty, so enjoyed .. luv your wording.. thankxxx for your gracious comments on my poetry tonight.. much appreciated... keep up this great writing for us to enjoy.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/7/2009 6:42:00 PM
:o) Delicious tidbit here, Marty! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/7/2009 12:27:00 AM
Nice Haiku Marty! :) thanks for your kind comment and I appreciate your reading time... I'll be back for more of you too ;)
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Date: 11/6/2009 3:04:00 PM
wow..excellent--Charma
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Date: 11/4/2009 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku Marty >> James
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Date: 11/4/2009 2:21:00 PM
this could be read so many ways, interesting, enjoyed!
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Date: 11/3/2009 8:22:00 PM
Interesting and well written Haiku. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 11/3/2009 8:02:00 PM
I must agree with Sue, Martin. There is a lot said in this brief verse form. Sometimes a moment of delight can erase the cares away. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/3/2009 7:06:00 PM
Hmmmm ... for not thinking of yourself as a poet or being "too deep", you've got quite a brillant Haiku here my friend and I love the title ... smile ...
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