A Cleansing Lust

Luscious Pomegranate.
Sensuously caresses,
Cares go down the drain!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 4:46 AM
how true how true! Light & Love
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November 8, 2009 at 8:24 PM
Wonderfully descriptive haiku, Marty, so enjoyed .. luv your wording.. thankxxx for your gracious comments on my poetry tonight.. much appreciated... keep up this great writing for us to enjoy.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 7, 2009 at 6:42 PM
:o) Delicious tidbit here, Marty! Hugs, Donna
Gumbo Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 12:27 AM
Nice Haiku Marty! :) thanks for your kind comment and I appreciate your reading time... I'll be back for more of you too ;)
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November 6, 2009 at 3:04 PM
wow..excellent--Charma
Fraser Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Wonderful Haiku Marty >> James
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November 4, 2009 at 2:21 PM
this could be read so many ways, interesting, enjoyed!
Delacroix Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 8:22 PM
Interesting and well written Haiku. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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November 3, 2009 at 8:02 PM
I must agree with Sue, Martin. There is a lot said in this brief verse form. Sometimes a moment of delight can erase the cares away. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
Mason Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 7:06 PM
Hmmmm ... for not thinking of yourself as a poet or being "too deep", you've got quite a brillant Haiku here my friend and I love the title ... smile ...
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