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A Circle Green In Seasons Scene

Wreath twisted by handwork combined A wreath with strands of holly and vine. A seasonal sign the withy willow with blood beads red With branches by hand, a woven wreath design. Wreath writhing wrists work wildly, Wildly within a world worn worthy, winter wanted, And work-ed wreath, to enliven winter whitened door or walls, Wreath in the wild winter will wild wishes fulfil. ©Joe Maverick 12-2010 in participation & support of Dr Rams Christmas wreath contest.

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/20/2012 9:19:00 PM

Gotta love those Christmas wreaths, Joe! Especially the hand made ones.:) They liven up a home and perk up one's spirit! A belated congratulations on this winning piece! Best wishes, Love, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 7:31:00 PM

revisiting a Xmas poem of yours. A poem that you did very well with!

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/6/2011 10:34:00 PM

maybe so, maybe not?

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/27/2011 8:21:00 PM

Hi Joe we seem to be on a binge of miscommunication LOL no matter I don't remember saying you were in a contest? Perhaps I said why not enter my new one with a ballad for Halloween? Creepy Irish Critters? Anyway I do enjoy your work and your positive attitude! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2010 10:40:00 PM

ps Unless you withdrew this one from the contest? But then why couldn't you just enter it again in a new spot? Dr. Ram still has three spots left at this very moment!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2010 10:39:00 PM

I'ts definitely not too late. I saw Dr. Ram still is waiting to close the contest. Just go to "edit" and put the NEW version you posted in the place of THIS one. The new version will then show up in Dr. Ram's box right here. Then you can take THIS one and repost it, and of course, just delete the new one from its new place where you have it. You don't have to re-enter the contest because this is your "spot" right here, already entered. You can play around in this box all you want! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2010 9:26:00 PM

Also, you can use anything from the preceding line, it does not have to necessarily be the last word! goodnight now, Joe!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2010 9:07:00 PM

Joe, this is very nice. But I feel I should tell you. Reread the rules how to write this poem. If I am not mistaken, you have to use the last word of each line as the first word of a new line. HOpe that makes sense to you. LUv, Andrea

Susan Palli

Date: 12/15/2010 9:41:00 AM

good one!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/15/2010 7:40:00 AM

Excellent entry Joe and luv the alliteration used too.. very descriptive write on the wreath symbol.. good luck in the contest by Dr. Ram who always challenges us with new forms and themes.. enjoyed my friend with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2010 12:25:00 PM

Terrific description of the wreath in a poem enhanced by both rhyme and alliteration, Joe. Dr. Ram will love this one. Wishing you success and blessings, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/13/2010 7:57:00 AM

Wonderfully written work!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2010 5:17:00 PM

Good Alliteration..Sara