A Christmas Wish To Santa Mike

Santa would like us girls and boys to sit upon his knee 
Can we sit there Santa, my friend and me? 

We can bounce up and down and cause you to smile 
It will help keep you warm, as you fly each lonely mile 

We can whisper our wishes one in each ear 
But we expect you to grant them Santa, is that clear? 

There's a frown on your face for you have lots to please 
But we can be elves, and we like to tease 

My friend would like you Santa, to find her a pup 
One she can walk when she’s all dressed up 

She hears that dogs get a lot of attention 
And it may pass some to her, that is her intention 

For me Santa I’d like to kiss a man with a beard 
Can you grant me that wish, or is it too hard I fear? 

A beard that is long and white and fluf-fy 
Yes Santa that’s my wish, can you grant it for me? 

What we both want in a combined wish we say 
That all those on the soup will have a good day 

They’ve taken us in and caressed our battered egos 
So we wish them what they want, always highs, never lows. 

We wish happiness and health for the year that is new 
To all those that have struggled, please give them hope anew 

For you Santa Mike one last thing we wish 
To get you out of that suit, cos we think you’re de-lish 

We don’t want to sit on a knee all dressed in red 
So how about a tumble in a big king sized bed? 

©15/12/2012 
Collaboration with another poet who shall be named after the contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/11/2013 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Seren! Love, Annalise
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2013 2:00:00 PM
thank you Annalise, both Mandy and I enjoyed writing this one...Seren
Date: 12/20/2012 9:26:00 AM
Lucky Santa, lets hope his knee is padded for a comfortable seat, SAUCY AND NICE.
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Date: 12/20/2012 10:17:00 AM
Lol Robert, cant you see I am a shy retiring girl without a dirty thought in her head, its that Mandy thats the naughty one....Seren
Date: 12/16/2012 5:51:00 PM
I've never read a christmas poem like that, nice write, love it. Don't get father chritmas to hot though, the north pole is supposed to be cold! Read ;{>
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/16/2012 11:09:00 PM
Its a modern version Santa poem David. .....Seren
Date: 12/16/2012 3:35:00 PM
i too love this, Seren, wont tell a soul...thanks for my placement in your fisherman contest...
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Date: 12/16/2012 11:10:00 PM
Lol Harry your as twp as me ......Seren
Date: 12/15/2012 3:15:00 PM
I enjoyed your's and Mandy's naughty Christmas wish. That Mike is one lucky Santa!
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Date: 12/15/2012 3:23:00 PM
sssssshhhhhh Richard its a secret hehe or should I say hohoho. Nadolig Llawen, Richard .......Seren
Date: 12/15/2012 1:51:00 PM
This is a cracker Seren , just love it and hope you get your wishes xx
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Date: 12/15/2012 2:24:00 PM
Thank you Mandy, and whatever is on your wish list I hope is fulfilled..x
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