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A Christmas Time Tale

Covering The Mall
Hopping 
Shopping

Last Minute Quest

Time gone
Fast Flown

Wrapping Gifts At Midnight

Spilled drink
Heart sinks

Christmas Presents Opened, Paper Strown

Unwrapped
Feel trapped

Guest All Gone

Riot
Quiet  

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Jack Horne January 28, 2017 at 9:43 AM ha ha, it seems like only yesterday that we were all preparing for Christmas Sara Kendrick January 28, 2017 at 12:55 PM Well, it hasn't been long since Christmas..I am still paying for it..LOL..Sara

Toni Orban January 1, 2017 at 11:39 PM wow! I felt the frantic pace of the poem matches whirlwind pace of Christmas time. It is spondaic dimeter in much of the poem? Very well done. Toni O. Sara Kendrick January 2, 2017 at 9:18 AM Toni, It does get to be frantic around Christmas but there is joy in giving and sharing wonderful food and family's love.. Sara

Jack Horne November 27, 2016 at 10:16 AM LOL, had a chuckle at these Sara Kendrick November 27, 2016 at 2:34 PM Thanks for dropping by..Glad that you got a chuckle..Sara

Jerome Malenfant November 5, 2016 at 2:24 PM Nice footle. Congrats on the win. Sara Kendrick November 5, 2016 at 3:03 PM Jerome,Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting..Sara

Afzal Nusker October 31, 2016 at 12:02 AM Wonderful footles with joyous spirit. Congratulations on your win, Sara.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2016 at 5:10 PM I enjoyed your holiday footles ,Sara. Congrats to you

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2016 at 1:40 PM - Back to your winning poem, Sara - CONGRATULATIONS - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison October 30, 2016 at 1:29 PM A lovely string of footles Sara. For THIS I would have preferred no individual titles for the footles as I was looking for a string of poems that flowed... but this style will be fine in the next contest:-)hugs Jan xx

John Hardison October 29, 2016 at 10:14 PM Problem in our tradition do dwell. Well put. Have a good weekend. Peace, Love and Joy

Paloma P October 29, 2016 at 4:22 PM I can't believe it's that time again. Perfect, the season is nothing if not hectic, the quiet is always welcome when it's over.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2016 at 7:07 AM - Always quiet after the storm :) - Lovely written, Sara- Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner October 29, 2016 at 6:12 AM Sounds like a good old fashioned Christmas to me, Mrs Sara:) Sara Kendrick October 29, 2016 at 7:00 AM Daniel, It seems to happen here every year but thank God I am still able to do some of this..Thanks for the visit and the kind review..Sara

CayCay Godwin October 28, 2016 at 11:23 PM This could be called "A Woman at Christmas Time" - related to each footle! CayCay Sara Kendrick October 29, 2016 at 6:59 AM CayCay, I did not occur that it was from a woman's point of view but it sure is for most men would not have a clue about all of this..LOL..Well, maybe the last minute present buying..LOL>>Thanks for dropping by..Sara