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A Christmas Memory

Last year our festive table was set for four We raised a glass of wine to toast the future Memories of my father who we did adore For this year you share your meal with your Lord Contest: A Christmas Memory Sponsor: Broken Wings Jan Allison 22nd November 2015
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Haight Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Jan, back to congratulate you on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations Jan.
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 9:10 PM
Sweet memories :)
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Thanks Ed:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Beautiful, crisp, touching and loving! Congrats on your win ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 1:07 AM
Thanks CayCay hope you are feeling better my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:43 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win, Jan!
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Fisher Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Well penned, Jan. Quite a memory
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Thanks David - it will be very tough especially for mum this year:-( hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:59 PM
you did AWESOME, Jan. Truly a deserved first place win. BIG congrats.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Thanks so much Andrea it was a contest I couldn't miss writing for have read some very emotional poems:-( hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Have only now realized that the results for this contest are out...so pleased to be back with merited congratulations:) Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:47 PM
Thanks Paul it is hard keeping up with writing, commenting and congratulating - oh and working too lol:-( hugs jan xx
Cwiak Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:07 PM
He must have made many of your Christmas memories filled with joy. Congrats on the win.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Thanks Dan it is going to be very difficult especially for mum this year:-( hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:00 PM
First let me say, This is beautiful....and Secondly....Congratulations on Number Won....
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Thanks Judy:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Congrats on your win Jan!! Have a great day :)-lu *smiles*
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Thanks Lu:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:04 PM
Jan, Congratulations on your Christmas Memory win. Luv **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:51 AM
- It is rare that I participate in anyone contest ...... however, this was so nice - Many great and some sad memories we shared - Congratulations with your poems, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Thanks Anne Lise it was a contest I had to enter too - I don't enter them all:-) hugs Jan xx
Inman Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 10:48 AM
This is really beautiful, Jan.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Thanks so much James :-) hugs Jan xx
Hy Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Congrats on your first placement in the contest Jan...Your dad indeed is in a better place and having a wonderful time with the Lord. Love, Rahy
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Rahy:-) hugs Jan xx
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 9:19 AM
i miss my dad reading this :( congrats on the win Jan :)
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Remants - it is going to be very hard for mum they were married for 58 years:-(:-) hugs Jan xx
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 8:29 AM
A precious memory Jan. Thanks for sharing, and congrats on your great win. Curtis.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Thanks Curtis:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:16 AM
Very touching write...Congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:56 AM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 6:31 AM
A moving piece.... Congrats for your #2 place in the contest Jan! ;-)
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Many thanks Teddy:-) Hugs Jan xx
Cheema Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:04 AM
A doting daughter wins! Congrats Jan! Love, Balveen
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Many thanks Balveen :-) Hugs Jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 2:44 AM
COngratz Jan! Sad but you have to believe that after life you'll meet again and where? in heaven. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Thanks Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:21 AM
A worthy topster, though sad in content Jan, well done. Viv x
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:27 AM
Sad but true Mr Viv:-( I have only got 1 present so far its for mum - my heart isn't in it:-( hugs jan xx
Gentry Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:59 AM
Congrats Jan! We toast the future and never know... Very expressive poem.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Thanks Susan it is going to be difficult for us all this year:-( hugs jan xx
Bhurani Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:19 AM
So touching and sentimental....brimming with emotions....congrats
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Sadly true for me this year and I guess many can relate:-( hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Poignant Jan... congrats on top podium!
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 1:15 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
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