A Christmas If Only

Ho, Ho, Ho, 
Presents for the poor
Santa exclaimed, oh lore,  
From his sleigh, up high
In the starlit sky
Given by you all, my oh my.






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18/12/2021
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Roper Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 2:42 PM
Great poem. Hugs Eve
Kiser Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 4:21 PM
A sweet penning.
Mcconnell Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Nice one Jenny, really taking us down Santa's avenue. Really gets me in the mood as been watching ' miracle on 34th street' todau so now all ready for Santa's arrival. Have a blessed Christmas, Gordon
Messina Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 5:54 AM
A wonderful Christmas wish, Jennifer. Wishing you and yours a verry Merry Christmas and a Healthy & Happy New Year! Hugs Charlie
Laurie Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 5:56 PM
Hello Jennifer ... fits in perfectly with the spirit of Christmas - Merry Christmas Jennifer - Lindsay
Gentile Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Indeed, this is a lovely holiday wish Jennifer! A beautiful "Bite Sized" treasure! Merry Christmas!!!
Lawrence Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Jennifer , Yes let’s all give … Selflessly From the bottom of our hearts To those in need . Love this ! Happy healthy holidays to you and yours . Hugs, Susan :)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 10:35 AM
A wonderful story/write. All the gifts raining down. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Andresen Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 3:38 AM
- Dear Jenny, I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a blessed new year :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Awtry Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 5:53 AM
What a beautiful wish! “From his sleigh up high in the starlit sky”—love that!
Watt Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 3:29 PM
This bite size poem really demonstrates your compassionate heart. How wonderful to think that all would be included in Christmas joy being remembered by thoughtful friends, neighbours, and loved ones. Wishing you and your family a joy-filled celebration of Christ's birth. Blessings and hugs ~ John
Pandit Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Much joy in this verse---very apt for the season. Enjoyed the upbeat voice of your poem, Jennifer.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Hello Jennifer, the unfortunate at Christmas should be remembered. So does the homeless. Merry Christmas. Enjoy your dY MY FRIEND. hUGS.
Brown Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 12:43 PM
Very nice poem, Nicely written... Remembering those less fortunate is what the spirt of Christmas is all about. Christmas Blessings ~ Debra
Jayasankar Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 8:42 AM
A beautiful Christmas write dear Jenni...Wishing you a merry Christmas my friend...Best wishes and Hugs...~ Ani
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Cute Christmas bite-sized poem, dear Jennifer. I wish you a merry Christmas.
Rose  Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 4:46 AM
How important it is to remember those less fortunate then us, a small gift can mean so much, Happy Christmas dear woman, love and blessings, xo
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 3:08 AM
A lovely thought Jennifer, wouldn't be wonderful if poverty was a thing of the past. Have a lovely Christmas. Tom
Deo Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 2:55 AM
Bite-sized dreams and wishes for all at CHRISTmas, Thanx for being here on PS . Eirene my friend
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