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A Christmas If Only

Ho, Ho, Ho, Presents for the poor Santa exclaimed, oh lore, From his sleigh, up high In the starlit sky Given by you all, my oh my. To Enter Competition "Bite Size Poem" Sponsor : Line Gunter 18/12/2021

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/18/2022 2:42:00 PM

Great poem. Hugs Eve

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/1/2022 4:21:00 PM

A sweet penning.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 12/23/2021 12:38:00 PM

Nice one Jenny, really taking us down Santa's avenue. Really gets me in the mood as been watching ' miracle on 34th street' todau so now all ready for Santa's arrival. Have a blessed Christmas, Gordon

Charles Messina

Date: 12/23/2021 5:54:00 AM

A wonderful Christmas wish, Jennifer. Wishing you and yours a verry Merry Christmas and a Healthy & Happy New Year! Hugs Charlie

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/22/2021 5:56:00 PM

Hello Jennifer ... fits in perfectly with the spirit of Christmas - Merry Christmas Jennifer - Lindsay

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/22/2021 4:25:00 AM

Indeed, this is a lovely holiday wish Jennifer! A beautiful "Bite Sized" treasure! Merry Christmas!!!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/21/2021 4:27:00 PM

Jennifer , Yes let’s all give … Selflessly From the bottom of our hearts To those in need . Love this ! Happy healthy holidays to you and yours . Hugs, Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/21/2021 10:35:00 AM

A wonderful story/write. All the gifts raining down. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2021 3:38:00 AM

- Dear Jenny, I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a blessed new year :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/20/2021 5:53:00 AM

What a beautiful wish! “From his sleigh up high in the starlit sky”—love that!

John Watt

Date: 12/19/2021 3:29:00 PM

This bite size poem really demonstrates your compassionate heart. How wonderful to think that all would be included in Christmas joy being remembered by thoughtful friends, neighbours, and loved ones. Wishing you and your family a joy-filled celebration of Christ's birth. Blessings and hugs ~ John

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/19/2021 5:30:00 AM

Much joy in this verse---very apt for the season. Enjoyed the upbeat voice of your poem, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/18/2021 12:56:00 PM

Hello Jennifer, the unfortunate at Christmas should be remembered. So does the homeless. Merry Christmas. Enjoy your dY MY FRIEND. hUGS.

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/18/2021 12:43:00 PM

Very nice poem, Nicely written... Remembering those less fortunate is what the spirt of Christmas is all about. Christmas Blessings ~ Debra

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/18/2021 8:42:00 AM

A beautiful Christmas write dear Jenni...Wishing you a merry Christmas my friend...Best wishes and Hugs...~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2021 7:18:00 AM

Cute Christmas bite-sized poem, dear Jennifer. I wish you a merry Christmas.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/18/2021 4:46:00 AM

How important it is to remember those less fortunate then us, a small gift can mean so much, Happy Christmas dear woman, love and blessings, xo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/18/2021 3:08:00 AM

A lovely thought Jennifer, wouldn't be wonderful if poverty was a thing of the past. Have a lovely Christmas. Tom

Anil Deo

Date: 12/18/2021 2:55:00 AM

Bite-sized dreams and wishes for all at CHRISTmas, Thanx for being here on PS . Eirene my friend