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A Christmas Carol

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If only If only I could Walk back in time Jesus alive on the cross I cried at this great loss As church bells are ringing Sat In the last pew singing Just a child you see Safe and sound In a home with joyous Christmas sounds Santa always close Christmas my happiness ghost Tidings and cheer Family surrounded me Took away all my fears Aunts and uncles so boisterous Plum pudding and hard sauce with Irish Cream Their laughter invades my midnight dreams Us children in awe and anticipation Christmas a miracle lighted with elation Looking out frosted windows Snowmen begging to be born A time I miss, feeling so forlorn Dancing with ghosts of the past How could a child ever know This happiness never lasts

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Date: 11/29/2017 9:52:00 PM
A great last line Arthur...And a lovely poem...
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Date: 11/26/2017 7:03:00 PM
Yes, Arthur, I know this feeling. It all fades away so quickly. We don't know how lucky we are when we have it. Loved this. (my captcha says "MAS" for Christmas!!
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Date: 11/23/2017 11:09:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful, Art! And perfect timing too! Love it, my friend
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Date: 11/23/2017 7:41:00 AM
You have recreated some wonderful memories through your magical words, Arthur:) I loved the video:)
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Date: 11/23/2017 12:29:00 AM
We live for those time of good memories that we use to have .. sometimes it makes us feel better that we did have them at one time... Beautiful verse and I love the Celtic Women .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/22/2017 8:04:00 AM
We live those moments without worry
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Date: 11/22/2017 12:55:00 AM
This a fantastic poem Art, so full of great imagery, and longing for times that will not come back. Fave my friend.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:19:00 PM
So kind, thanks Darren.

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