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A Christmas Carol

If only
If only I could
Walk back in time
Jesus alive on the cross
I cried at this great loss
As church bells are ringing
Sat In the last pew singing 

Just a child you see
Safe and sound
In a home with joyous Christmas sounds

Santa always close
Christmas my happiness ghost
Tidings and cheer
Family surrounded me
Took away all my fears
Aunts and uncles so boisterous
Plum pudding and hard sauce with Irish Cream
Their laughter invades my midnight dreams

Us children in awe and anticipation
Christmas a miracle lighted with elation
Looking out frosted windows
Snowmen begging to be born

A time I miss, feeling so forlorn
Dancing with ghosts of the past
How could a child ever know
This happiness never lasts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/29/2017 9:52:00 PM
A great last line Arthur...And a lovely poem...
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Date: 11/26/2017 7:03:00 PM
Yes, Arthur, I know this feeling. It all fades away so quickly. We don't know how lucky we are when we have it. Loved this. (my captcha says "MAS" for Christmas!!
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Date: 11/23/2017 11:09:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful, Art! And perfect timing too! Love it, my friend
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Date: 11/23/2017 7:41:00 AM
You have recreated some wonderful memories through your magical words, Arthur:) I loved the video:)
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Date: 11/23/2017 12:29:00 AM
We live for those time of good memories that we use to have .. sometimes it makes us feel better that we did have them at one time... Beautiful verse and I love the Celtic Women .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/22/2017 8:04:00 AM
We live those moments without worry
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Date: 11/22/2017 12:55:00 AM
This a fantastic poem Art, so full of great imagery, and longing for times that will not come back. Fave my friend.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:19:00 PM
So kind, thanks Darren.
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