A Child's Innocence

When mommy and daddy fight, 
I hold my teddy very tight.

If I let go, he might cry,
so I sing him a little lullaby.

We hide in my room on my bed
with a blanket over our head.

I don't mean to be so bad.
I always seem to make them mad.

I don't want my daddy to leave.
I'll make a wish, I do believe.

The house is quiet; the monsters have fled.
Daddy has come to put me to bed.

Now I lay me down to sleep.
I pray the Lord my soul to keep...

Jesus, help me to stay good
like mommy and daddy's 'big girl' should.

God bless daddy and mommy too.
Help them to love everyone like You.

Was daddy crying when he said, "Goodnight"?
I hope everything will be alright.

August 31, 2015
Through A Child's Eyes.
Contest by Silent One.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nau Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Ahhh! It is the pain of the first disturbance of innocence and how children KNOW they are to blame. Your poem is a great vehicle for teaching how easily abuse becomes ingrained and how quickly sadness can know the heart of a child. Sad.
Nunez Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 1:34 PM
You captured the innocent language of a child as well as the normal reaction of blaming oneself when parents fight within earshot. And this won too..Congrats my friend. hugs!
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 11:57 AM
- A heartbreaking beautiful poem, Janece - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sietesantos Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Hi Janece, This is such a sad heartfelt write! Congratulations on your great win! And A-7! Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Congrats Janece for a deserved big win with this very emotive write!
A  Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 5:54 PM
Janece, Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 3:57 PM
such an emotive write congrats on your win Janece:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 1, 2015 at 1:00 AM
Very nicely written poem. So well portrayed. Children do feel in those situations they are to blame.
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