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A CHILDs CRAYON

kisses form flowers billow, filled in with color a child’s crayon moves so much like a seismograph happiness upon the page

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Hilo Poet

Date: 12/3/2023 8:58:00 AM

Aloha, Kim. We've them all o'er this shake-n-bake isle, ... and those seimograph's too. Lol. Mahalo, William

Bill Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 6:55:00 PM

Nice Tanka poem, my friend. Crayons can be a lot of fun, especially for the very young. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/2/2023 6:12:00 AM

Have got a few of my grandsons pictures, worth more to me than Rembrandt lol. Enjoy your weekend Kim Tom

Paige Hind

Date: 12/1/2023 9:04:00 PM

Really cute!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2023 4:39:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2023 7:33:00 PM

S really adorable well crated tanka, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2023 4:39:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea! When they draw, color, create it bings such joy :) God bless!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/1/2023 3:51:00 PM

this is softly beautiful! You're so right, a children's crayon moves like a seismograph! Perfect image along with 'happiness on the page.' Well done, Kim. Have a great evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2023 6:21:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Marilene Evans

Date: 12/1/2023 12:04:00 PM

Wonderful and lovely poem. The sweetness of innocence in children.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2023 6:21:00 PM

Truly! Thank you :)

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2023 11:02:00 AM

Lovely arrangement of words Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2023 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, Silent! :)

John Lawless

Date: 12/1/2023 10:37:00 AM

fabulous.....every child would FAVE this and since i am still an undeclared adult I shall FAVE THIS

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2023 10:39:00 AM

giggle…thank you, John.