A CHILDs CRAYON

kisses form flowers billow, filled in with color a child’s crayon moves so much like a seismograph happiness upon the page
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Aloha, Kim. We've them all o'er this shake-n-bake isle, ... and those seimograph's too. Lol. Mahalo, William
Baker Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Nice Tanka poem, my friend. Crayons can be a lot of fun, especially for the very young. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Cunningham Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Have got a few of my grandsons pictures, worth more to me than Rembrandt lol. Enjoy your weekend Kim Tom
Hind Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 9:04 PM
Really cute!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 4:39 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 7:33 PM
S really adorable well crated tanka, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 4:39 AM
Thank you, Andrea! When they draw, color, create it bings such joy :) God bless!
Evans Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Wonderful and lovely poem. The sweetness of innocence in children.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 6:21 PM
Truly! Thank you :)
One Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Lovely arrangement of words Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 6:22 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)
Lawless Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 10:37 AM
fabulous.....every child would FAVE this and since i am still an undeclared adult I shall FAVE THIS
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 10:39 AM
giggle…thank you, John.
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