A Child Is Born

I was there with Herod the king.
I heard his voice raised in panic and fear.
Often he would mumble about a threat on his throne.
Now I know it was a child he bemoaned.
I knew of his plan to be rid of him,
So with sadness in my heart I abandoned my king, 
for such a man I cannot serve.
 
I followed the wise men to Bethlehem 
and found the Child, wrapped in strips of cloth.
the Prince of peace,
my new King.

I knelt before Him.
A garment of purple,
befitting a King, 
I presented to Him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Promise Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Excellent Poem and Epic form for a Mighty King. Hope to read more poems from you.
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January 31, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Spectacular write Neil from such a neat and accurate point of view. Very touching and also a poignant point for those whose still do follow that king. Take care. God Bless! Funny the 3 letter code was tru
Kruger Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Vincent. Glad you enjoyed it.
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January 21, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Neil, Awesome Poem, thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Kruger Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thanks for reading it SKAT.
Andresen Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 1:47 PM
- Neil, a lovely poem :) - Marry Christmas to you and your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Beautiful pen Neil! Very nice piece about Baby Jesus our Savior and King! I enjoyed it.A 7!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:) D.
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November 29, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Thank you Dorian. Glad you liked it.
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