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1/21/2025 for New Voices Poetry Contest sponsored by Regina Mcintosh

Deadlines, responsibilities Cubicles, liabilities Dour adulthood, I did attain Alas, to be a child again It was once easy to have fun Racing on grass under the sun We would find ways to entertain Alas, to be a child again Our moms said, "put your raincoats on" Embracing water like a swan And singing songs out in the rain Alas, to be a child again Imagination gave us wings We became princesses and kings And precious fantasy would reign Alas, to be a child again Kicking stones to school every day I knew each flower on the way To linger on that country lane Alas, to be a child again Glancing shyly, her long blonde braids, A memory that never fades, To only see my smiling Jane, Alas, to be a child again Now, bones don't move so well. They ache. Falling apart, too much to take Soon, I'll be walking with a cane Alas, to be a child again The everlasting search for truth, And that cagey fountain of youth - Why must it always be in vain? Alas, to be a child again I have been fortunate indeed Into my dotage, I recede I can't but think, as life does wane Alas, to be a child again

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Date: 2/26/2025 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win. "A Child Again" is a wonderfully nostalgic and deeply relatable poem that beautifully captures the universal longing for the carefree days of childhood. You've skillfully used simple language and vivid imagery to evoke a sense of warmth and longing, creating a poem that is both comforting and poignant.
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David Crandall
Date: 2/26/2025 9:04:00 AM
Wow, really nice comments, thank you Joel!
Date: 2/22/2025 10:15:00 AM
Love this one. Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina
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David Crandall
Date: 2/22/2025 11:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Gina!
Date: 1/21/2025 12:55:00 PM
Well said. I can see myself in this poem. I like the Alas, to be a child again at the end of each stanza.
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David Crandall
Date: 1/21/2025 7:38:00 PM
Thanks! Did you ever see that old Twilight Zone episode "Kick the Can"? I think of that.

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