A Cheesy Line
If I walked up to you and said:
Excuse me miss,
but I had to come over
and say that you are the most stunning,
breathtaking woman I have laid my eyes upon.
"Girl, if god made anything prettier, I hope he kept it for himself."
(use a cheesy pick up line, a smile I see.)
I had to spark conversation with you..
My name is Jared...
Would you walk away?
Jared Pickett
11/24/09
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Copyright © Jared Pickett | Year Posted 2009
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