A Chat With Happiness

Little girl *crying*: why have you abandoned us, why did it have to be like this?

Happiness: I have an order from God that; I must wait, that you must endure a little more 
pain to get me…

Little girl: if we endured more pain, will you come back, when all the doors are locked, when 
all the people are against us, will u come back when no one truly understands except God? 

Happiness: little girl, you should not be questioning like this, you just have to have hope;
Hope that I return. 

Little girl: if I had hope for your return, will you return?

Happiness: with God’s will I will 
 
Little girl: but can you hurry up, because I guess my mom will break if dad didn’t see his 
mistakes.

Happiness* wipes girl’s tears*: I am always will you, even if you think I’m not there, I am 
there, just believe in God and you will lack nothing! 

Little girl* smiles*: I love God and I will believe that in his will that this is for the best, and 
may God bless us.

Happiness: don’t be afraid, God will order me to accompany you, with his with, I will…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/28/2010 10:38:00 PM
great writing louzana, God works in mysterious ways
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:19:00 PM
Very creative and ingenious write ... splendidly crafted.. enjoyed.. with luv..
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:13:00 PM
The poem is sad, thanks God for the ending, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:09:00 PM
This is hard one ...Where is God when someone as innocent as a child needs him? He is only there through the spirit and people who should be meeting the needs of others..Good job in presenting this idea..Sara
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