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A Change of Heart

My dreams turn red fallen by a wayside A change of heart All for what? Time flies Quick Now Autumn’s Fallen leaves Dry as the breeze Raking up a storm of forgotten leaves! 31.8.2021 Photo No: 3

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Date: 9/14/2021 11:38:00 AM
Fall can be a melancoly time - summer is over, the harvest is gathered and the trees, while beautiful, are losing their colorful leaves. Wonderful metaphoric write and analogy Carol Congratulations and blessings.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 9/14/2021 7:08:00 PM
Absolutely Sam.....I am so glad it resonated with you....much love :)
Date: 9/10/2021 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a pretty write and time of the year. I love Fall and the colorful leaves. Have a blessed day with your day..............
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Date: 9/9/2021 6:22:00 PM
congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery and flow. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/2/2021 1:03:00 AM
Great interpretation of the picture, Carol, very unique:)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 9/2/2021 5:38:00 AM
Hi Jo....I am glad you liked the poem....thanks :)
Date: 8/31/2021 12:09:00 PM
Hello Carol Mitra, yes Carol when the leaves are fallen itis time to rke them up. Hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2021 11:28:00 AM
Hello Carol Mitra, You are welcome my friend. Love.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 9/1/2021 12:03:00 AM
Thanks dear Darlene....much love :)

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