Carol Mitra Poet Tetractys

A Change of Heart

My dreams turn red fallen by a wayside
A change of heart
All for what?
Time flies
Quick
Now
Autumn’s
Fallen leaves
Dry as the breeze
Raking up a storm of forgotten leaves!

31.8.2021
Photo No: 3

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Sam Kauffman September 14, 2021 at 11:38 AM Fall can be a melancoly time - summer is over, the harvest is gathered and the trees, while beautiful, are losing their colorful leaves. Wonderful metaphoric write and analogy Carol Congratulations and blessings. Carol Mitra September 14, 2021 at 7:08 PM Absolutely Sam.....I am so glad it resonated with you....much love :)

Paula Goldsmith September 10, 2021 at 7:28 AM Congratulations on your win. What a pretty write and time of the year. I love Fall and the colorful leaves. Have a blessed day with your day..............

Eve Roper September 9, 2021 at 6:22 PM congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery and flow. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve

Joanna Daniel September 2, 2021 at 1:03 AM Great interpretation of the picture, Carol, very unique:) Carol Mitra September 2, 2021 at 5:38 AM Hi Jo....I am glad you liked the poem....thanks :)

Darlene De Beaulieu August 31, 2021 at 12:09 PM Hello Carol Mitra, yes Carol when the leaves are fallen itis time to rke them up. Hugs Darlene De Beaulieu September 1, 2021 at 11:28 AM Hello Carol Mitra, You are welcome my friend. Love. Carol Mitra September 1, 2021 at 12:03 AM Thanks dear Darlene....much love :)