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A Change In the Weather

The tides coming in on rocky grey blight
knocking on my worn-out cabin door
incessant waves break white in full sight
whoosh of clear bubbling effervescent light
inching ever closer, its breath is hard to ignore
helpless seaweed pushed up on the shore

I greet my uninvited noisy morning guest
a crow sitting on a weather worn old log
just a stop to preen while getting some rest
we both watch the ocean’s journey quest
with hopping steps he decides to finally jog
and I give a shout to bring in my wayward dog

just at its peak the tide turn stutters and retreats
the morn has darkened, today we will get no blue
like a marching band, rain starts in pelting sheets
the waves are now crashing with similar beats
I close my door and secure the shutter latch too
looks like I will stay inside, I have housework to do

8-5-2020
Nature Rhyming Poetry Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

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Date: 8/5/2020 2:49:00 PM
You've written a great descriptive poem here Jeanne that has a great atmosphere. I can almost feel the 'pelting sheets' of rain. Good luck in Brenda's competition.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/5/2020 7:01:00 PM
Thanks Gary...I love how we can draw on past experiences to see what could be before us right now. :D
Date: 8/5/2020 2:17:00 PM
Trust the rain to spoil the day, enjoyed your verse Jeanne, Good luck in the contest Tom
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/5/2020 7:02:00 PM
Hey Tom...I sure hope the problems with commenting is done. Nice to see you again my friend. Hope you are doing well. Jeanne

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