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A Champion For the Wounded

I write upon the silent cry of the wounded.
      Helpless, Jane Doe feels alone in her plight
        and no one hears her muffled screams;
                     she suffers in silence.
    She has endured domestic violence, cowered;
            stayed mum in fear of retaliation,

          revictimization through recrimination.
        Victims like her need to be empowered
                  to flee domestic violence.
                   Nothing is what it seems
on the surface when deep secrets don't come to light
               Broken, she eventually mended.

           Litany of therapies she has attended;
           For others, she will continue to fight.
            Lest she comes apart at the seams,
                    fights back in defiance.
 By helping others, she takes back her own power;
         champion worthy of admiration!


My Invented Form - I Write Upon Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Rhyme Scheme: abcdef fedcba abcdef
Syllable count: 12,10,8,6,12,10 - 12,10,8,6,12,10 - 12,10,8,6,12,10
Date written: 02/13/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Hi Edward, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is wonderful _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Constance!:-) Most obliged.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 2:23 AM
Lovely... a champion of a poem. God bless you my friend, with love and prayers, Happy Valentine's Day. Love, Gina
Ibeh Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 4:38 AM
Thank you very much, Regina:-) Happy Valentine's Day to you as well, my friend!
Pandit Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 2:51 PM
Splendidly done, Edward. I like the theme you chose and emotions you evoked in rhymes--in this difficult to execute form.
Ibeh Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-) Blessings to you, my friend...
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