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a caterpillar sleeps

a caterpillar sleeps in its chrysalis -- a butterfly wakes jack horne for gail's butterfly contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/7/2012 8:08:00 PM
Hey, I just looked up the word, and it is with only one L, JAck. I was thinking maybe you were the right one, because I just saw another person's poem spelling it also with two L's!
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Date: 4/7/2012 8:07:00 PM
hmmm, Did I not spell that Chrysallis with two L's. I better maybe fix my poem!! This is wonderful, Jack.
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Date: 4/7/2012 3:10:00 PM
Nice juxto and my favorite insect..you got a winner, Jack! Hey, have a grrrreat Easter weekend! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:37:00 PM
Nicely done haiku. Best of luck.
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:35:00 PM
a true haiku.
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Date: 4/7/2012 11:18:00 AM
Oh, this is beautiful!! What a wonderful image, Jack. Winning wishes in Gail's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2012 10:41:00 AM
oh how lovely Jack.. only u can say so much in so few words.. it is a gift my friend.. good luck in contest luv..
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Date: 4/7/2012 9:11:00 AM
Winner for sure..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the comments on my work..Sara
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