A Cat On the Bed

There was a fat man who slept on the floor
Like the roar of tiger he used to snore
Sensing danger to her life
The house cat ran to his wife
Deaf lady put her on bed, closed the door.

July 16, 2018
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Nance Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Congrats!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:58 AM
Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 12:27 AM
BACK with my CONGRATS!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 1:22 AM
Thank you, Andrea for your revisit.
Roper Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 9:22 PM
Congratulations on your great well written win, Subimal, so very witty :) enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 12:22 AM
Thank you, Eve for your visit.
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on your win. :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 12:22 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:33 PM
haha, I liked the great funny ending!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:16 PM
clever limerick Subimal many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Dutta Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 1:38 PM
The person who snores is totally unaware of the roar. That's the fun. Congrats
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Yes. Thanks.
Devonshire Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Thank goodness the wife couldn't hear her husband snoring! Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations! Carolyn
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Thank you, Carolyn.
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