A Castle Beaten By the Waves

And my heart shattered;
A castle beaten by the waves
Like there never was.
Neither the lamps at night
  above my shadow
Nor the flies on the willow
Leave me light,
As if there never was.
Was there any?
Sand castles weren’t made
 by me
And the darkness invaded
 my hope
(was there any at all?)
The way it blinded my sight
And tortured my soul.
I haven’t seen the bridge
And walked on towards you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Belle Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 9:06 AM
You really have a soul for writing poems.. Another nice one dear.. LoveLots, Ara
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July 28, 2014 at 3:36 AM
thank you. I just write what I feel
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