A Carnal Eclipse

Love all you ladies and your dangly bits My heart starts thumping and my drooling drips Right down to my chin Can't wipe off my grin As my body experiences a carnal eclipse © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 11/17/2015 2:26:00 PM
The ladies all be wanting you too....sitting on your lap telling what you want to do.... Naughty sleigh rides...mouths open wide....waiting to ride along with you.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/18/2015 8:29:00 AM
Don't know how many girlies my sleigh will hold but talk about JOLLY!!!
Date: 11/17/2015 11:06:00 AM
Wow! You and John have snow? Well, What would I expect from the great Frozen North? PS. Cap or not! You're still Santa Jack to us. Grandpa Troll says Dragon's still to young to explain about Santa yet. I agree. Three is one of those young delightful years. When I said that... Grandpa Troll promised me more fire extinguishers for Christmas. REALLY BIG fire extinguishers! I told him I don't need any fire hydrants in the middle of my house! He said the FireDept does... He's now ROFL! Silly Troll!
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:32:00 AM
Just a smattering but our dear John John lives in the mountains so he will definitely out-snow us!!! The cap?... too much flak! xoxox
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