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A Carnal Eclipse

Love all you ladies and your dangly bits
My heart starts thumping and I drool from my lips
Right down to my chin
Can't wipe off my grin
As my body experiences a carnal eclipse


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Dave Timperley

August 15, 2015 at 7:20 AM

Love your quirky style Jack. Gonna read some more. No one can have the blues reading this. D.

Laura Breidenthal

July 29, 2015 at 2:57 PM

Nice one here, Jack! It's always a pleasure reading your work. Thank you, also, for reading my poetry as well. Your comments and poetry always brighten my day. : ) Love you! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison

July 29, 2015 at 3:05 PM

Oh joy, oh joy! It's my sweet Laura friend! What more could I ask for... you brighten up my every day!!! Tons of love, Miss Laura... xxxxx

Alexis Y.

July 25, 2015 at 3:51 PM

Jack,this is another great humerous limerick:-) Alexis

Jack Ellison

July 25, 2015 at 3:58 PM

You are way too kind, my dearest Alexis! Thanks for dropping by... love, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

July 25, 2015 at 11:16 AM

Well... Sure glad to hear that... as at my age EVERYTHING is dangling and drooping! :) I guess it takes an old fart to appreciate an old fart!... LOL ...Now Grandpa Troll... Stop laughing! It's not funny... I'm not trying to be a comediene... Well... Hey if it works... Now he's laughing again... Honestly... Old men and Older Trolls... Can't live with em... And can't live without em... right Lady Cathie?

Jack Ellison

July 25, 2015 at 12:14 PM

YUP! Methinks gravity is taking it's toll! LOL From this old geezer to you, my ravishing beauty... love and squeezy hugs (not too tight though!) xxx

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