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A Carnal Eclipse

Love all you ladies and your dangly bits My heart starts thumping and I drool from my lips Right down to my chin Can't wipe off my grin As my body experiences a carnal eclipse © Jack Ellison 2015

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Dave Timperley

Date: 8/15/2015 7:20:00 AM

Love your quirky style Jack. Gonna read some more. No one can have the blues reading this. D.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/29/2015 2:57:00 PM

Nice one here, Jack! It's always a pleasure reading your work. Thank you, also, for reading my poetry as well. Your comments and poetry always brighten my day. : ) Love you! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/29/2015 3:05:00 PM

Oh joy, oh joy! It's my sweet Laura friend! What more could I ask for... you brighten up my every day!!! Tons of love, Miss Laura... xxxxx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/25/2015 3:51:00 PM

Jack,this is another great humerous limerick:-) Alexis

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/25/2015 3:58:00 PM

You are way too kind, my dearest Alexis! Thanks for dropping by... love, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/25/2015 11:16:00 AM

Well... Sure glad to hear that... as at my age EVERYTHING is dangling and drooping! :) I guess it takes an old fart to appreciate an old fart!... LOL ...Now Grandpa Troll... Stop laughing! It's not funny... I'm not trying to be a comediene... Well... Hey if it works... Now he's laughing again... Honestly... Old men and Older Trolls... Can't live with em... And can't live without em... right Lady Cathie?

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/25/2015 12:14:00 PM

YUP! Methinks gravity is taking it's toll! LOL From this old geezer to you, my ravishing beauty... love and squeezy hugs (not too tight though!) xxx