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A Caribbean Dream

I’m sure I was dreaming.
I could never afford to travel
To the most beautiful island
The world could provide.

Yet there I was swimming 
In warm clear aquamarine seas.
Out on the sand the view was stunning.
Houses built on the sea itself,
An aroma of shellfish and chicken
Filled the pure air.  I was hungry.
But I had no money, dressed in a bathing suit.

Someone called me and I was offered
A plate of aromatic food.
I ate it slowly, savoring delicious victuals.
Then my newfound friend took me for a walk.
I saw purple crabs scuttling sideways
Whilst at the edge of a forest
So lovely and tender, some mousedeer
Were pasturing quietly in the shade.

Then I realised how hot the midday sun was.
And I woke on my bed, sweating.
It was bliss to linger under a shower.
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George Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 10:51 PM
How I wish I had such heavenly dreams ! To land on the Carribean Islands and savor their delicasies and local cuisines would be fantastic.... !
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April 23, 2021 at 4:12 AM
What a dream, what a write, I’d like to go there too if only in dreams at night... Belle
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Victor, you have got a great imagination. Love the story. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 3:48 PM
ahhh, but a dream! Very nicely dreamed up!!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:55 AM
- Would like to have such a wonderful dream, Victor :) -Thank you very much for the beautiful and touching card :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 10:33 AM
The best dreams are so vivid, it's almost as if they were real. Your description of the dream made it very real for the reader. Beautifully written! :D
Daniel Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Such a wonderful dream, Victor:)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 8:32 PM
I would like that dream
Poet Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:26 PM
So vibrant and vivid dream, penned with such stunning words and imagery, have a great evening and best regards Dear friend
Mcintosh Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 11:14 AM
Yes. Dreams can be vivid indeed... wonderful writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Proxenos Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Dreams can be so vivid and realistic but mostly we can't remember them as they would maybe make us sad. Blessings and hugs Victor, I must say this was a blissful dream! Jennifer.
Jayasankar Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 9:30 AM
You surely had a lovely dream Victor. Very beautiful images you created for the readers to imagine your journey. God bless... ~ Ani
Kriticos Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 8:51 AM
This was such a joy to read. You really bring the reader to your paradise! Now all we need is a promotional link selling tickets and we're on our way!
Kitchin Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Love the imagery Victor! hugs
Ball Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 8:02 AM
What a beautiful dream. It sure would be nice to live some place like that. The description here is lovely. But I always wondered what do these sea dwelling people do in hurricane season. Their houses and boats would be destroyed. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Enjoyed the journey to Caribbean through your dream, Victor. Your images always bring the scenes alive to take the reader there. So well done!
Kendrick Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 3:16 AM
Great imagination the greatest nation on earth or was it only a night dream? Enjoyed reading your work. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 1:24 AM
When you have those dreams you just want to close your eyes and be back there again. Sadly your body has other ideas and you have to get up. Tom
Y. Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 11:22 PM
WoW! Victor, That was some dream. Your story was engaging and lovely. It was such wonderful vacation; was it paradise? Why did it have to end? I enjoyed the read my friend. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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